awsome!! please keep writing

draco: yess keep rigting my prety mva ha ha

me: O.O i'm scared

draco: i was kidding

me: now i'm more scared

Great Story, I can't wait until you update! I loved when she went to the fountain, It was like I could see it! Beautiful story, keep it up! --Paige

Very good. The place she went to seemed very beautiful. It had a great imagery to it. Somehow I don't think Draco followed her there...

hurry up and update already. I love this story it is positively marvelous, i like the direction this is heading...

Ginny and draco make a great pair. im a big shipper for those 2, and im glad you ship them too (methinks).

I thought the idea of the Fineliden Charm was very good, but the scene between Ginny and Draco was too short. I think you should add more to it. =]

great story
the whole concept of the charm is amazing...why cant i think of things like that! it was just a little too intense too fast, if you know what i mean.
please continue! cant wait for more!

aw.. I hope this isn't a one-shot. I'd really like to see more of this. The idea of the Fineliden Charm is a great idea, so interesting. Please continue this!! and great writing!
-nati

hmm...will this be continued? please?

Wow...that was awesome.. Are you going to continue it?

looks good, I wonder if draco knew about the charm before he came

HAHAHAHA! that's great! i dont know if it soposed to be funny, it wasn't... but it was good! yeay! update soon! yeay yeay yeay! but how come Ginny didn't realise it... hum... i will have to ponder...anywho. tata~

*Calla-ForEvEa*

truly it was okay!! It some parts it was confusing, but I liked it!

All in all, this fic was alright. I like the idea of the Fineliden Charm and how it transports you to an imaginary world, and I like the premise of the story, but some lines of this were a bit confusing. For exmple, "The snow had melted, but it still crunched it's remains beneath her feet when she walked, looking around". If the snow has melted, how could its (not "it's") remains crunch? You did have some really good lines in this, though, like "There were no pennies in the water, nobody had made a wish". That line seemed to imply so much...

And I can understand it Malfoy is a git, Potter at least had a character that could be redeemed which is not the case for that brat of Malfoy

yummy please update!