I've never actually read a Draco/Hermione fanfic but I plan to!
I even have an idea for a fanfic with them! Hee,hee! I understand story canon but hey, that's what fanfic is all about right? To express ideas and explore where a story could have gone and didn't! It was a good story though! there are some gramatical errors.

Um.. I was confused. He had a nightmare about marrying Hermione? But he's still the same mud-blood hating Draco that we all know. I can't say much for plot or anything, but good for conveying Draco's general feelings.

Hehe, nice twist. The corny parts of the first chapter absolutely deserved this ending. And Draco was perfectly in character, IMHO.

Oh finally, someone who doesn't want everyone to worship their work. "allensama" seemed to do a pretty good job, but I could help a bit, right?

Wow. You know, at first I wasn't going to read the 2nd chapter (I hated Ch1 with a passion similar to the the heat of the sun), but I'm really really happy I did. GO CANON!

Chapter 1 is very... fruity (or as we call it in America, "gay"). But hey, I'm American, what do I know? We're debating legalizing gay marriages here. I'm sure you intentionally made it gay.

Misspellings & Comments:

"Even Crabbe und Goyle were no longer mad at me." Yeah, I realized that Draco doesn't really care if they were mad at him. At first, I was wondering if you noticed. I was thrilled that you had.

"Goyle signalled that my life was over know." Giving Goyle's IQ too high of an opinion there. I'm glad you corrected it in your 2nd Chapter.

"Unfortunately not only Crabbe and Goyle had been waking up"... It's 'have' not 'had' and did you forget that Malfoy IS the Slytherin Prefect?

"Let me be clear about this - Goy …. Crabbe - had - a - nightmare" Haha. It sounds like something Draco would do- confuse his so-called-best-friends.

"I began whipping my lips" Yeah, that'll turn some Fangirls on. No more to be said.

"He dropped to the floor as Goyle let go off him and left the room" ... It's 'of' not 'off'.

I love the meaning of this chapter. It has real PURPOSE. Excellent.

HAHAHA! I am laughing so hard right now! Oh my gosh. Breathe in, breathe out. Let me recover...

Ah. Okay. Hehe. This story was so...twisty. I am a Draco and Hermione romance writer -- no, the horror, the HORROR! -- and reading this was...sort of like an eye opener. Haha. Well, there are some people in this world who do not appreciate Draco and Hermione romances. Ah well. Hehe. Nice fic.

-C. Callispi

I'm going to send you an email, so that you recognize my email and don't delete it I will be sending it from gilmoregirl1991@yahoo.com.

~Inspyred*

Hi your story is really good, it's shows a perspective that most people tend not to show. Most people try to stick towards the idea of Draco and Hermione some how falling for each other because that's just a pretty musch fairy tale ending.

Another thing I'd like to say is that you reviewed my story (Over Protected by Inspyred) and I just love constructive critisim. I was just wondering if you could review again and clear some things up for me. You see I believe fan fiction was created for one reason, so that fans around the world can create the story they want to see with characters from plots they like and dislike. First of all I was wondering what is so Mary Sue about giving Hermione violet eyes? You see in your review you said that Hermione had purple eyes but violet is a shade of purple that is very close to blue. Second of all I'd really like to thank you for pointing out that Nacrissa Malfoy was once a Black I must of overlooked this detail when writing my story. Why do you consider having violet eyes (which I describe as frightening because they are deep and pure in color also closer to blue than purple as I explained before)and raven black hair ugly? I was just trying to make her special in apperance because she came from such powerful families and parents and stuff. Oh and in regard to that one sentence you pointed out to me, by saying Draco was the only person Voldemort really cared about I'm trying to point out that Draco was a 'replacment' in Voldemort's heart after Hermione was kidnapped. Draco does not really replace Hermione, but Voldemort showers Draco was his affection because he misses his daughter. He's cautious around Draco because he does not want to push Draco away.

Anyway once again much thanks for the constructive critisim, I really want to make my story worth reading and I'm just trying to give the auidience what they want to hear. Your story totally rocks, I hope you write many more.

~Inspyred*

That's it? That was short. Oh well.

Well, this story is okay... not the best though. You really need more description, it was to fast. In one sentence he was at his bachalor's party and then the next sentence he was saying his 'I do's' I'm sure there was some preperation and what not somewhere in between that...

tHis would totally never happen!

WHY did you takw away my stories?/

it's so sweet. i like it really much.is it just a one-shot?

This story is so sweet..aww :)