very well writtin.

That fic made me smile, yes smile, because duo actually hade the courage to end it for himself when he knew there was no point any more, and because I’m happy for him that he gave up instead of continuously living lies and pains (don't worry if you don't under stand). Your fics are great, I’ve read a lot of fics where duo kills him self and so on, but your fics just have this different feel to them like there’s something more to it than just words and emotion.

:(, y is it always Duo that suffers. 8sniff* poor baby, How can heero do such a thing...sigh...

I'm... god, I'm speechless (a rare occasion for me.) I can't begin to tell you what this story did to me. Actually, I don't think i can speak coherently at all. I'll come back in a few moments and try this again.

Well, i guess i should admit that i cried at this fic. i've only ever cried once for a fic, i think, and not this much. i suppose i should also say that this is probably about the third deathfic i've read, i usually avoid them like the plague. so those two things speak so highly of your talent. this fic was just so beautifully written, so angsty and so hearfelt, if that makes any sense. and the way you wrote it, in second person's pov, made it just that much more real. i cannot begin to explain how this fic made me feel, but i think what i liked most was the second paragraph, about how the things he used to like, the scars and the thinness, now repulsed and disgusted him, because it is that exact way of thinking that made me stop cutting, and i think it's something that every cutter eventually feels, and you described it so well. oh, and the way you used his blood for the metaphorical tears was just perfect, it's so true for so many people, including me. i dont think i'm fully conveying how much i truly loved this story, but that's nothing new, i have trouble saying what i want, so just rest assured that i will be thinking of this fic for ages. great job.

Luv

ShinigamiPhoenix

PS-I'm gonna rec you on my LJ today, thought you might like to know.

Awesome story.I absolutely loved it.

ok something is seriously worng with Duo you are not supposed to giggle you are supposed to laugh like a maniac that is the correct way i think that is what i have read do far in death fics

dang...this is dark... how you used "you" instead of "Duo" or "he" was extremely powerful... it really created depth to this piece, and as sad as it is, it is wonderful and dark... I'm glad there are writers like you out there not afraid to write pain so bluntly and that you have the skill to write beautifully as well. Thank you.