the story of pain? a night to regret. the story of a girl. the rage inside.its never to late. a price soon payed. a unlikly event. theres me thinking for 3 min but theres some to think about. V.v

lol reminds me of the first ep of the venture brothers

The author is Pirate Monkey, and the co-writer NoroLimAsfaloth. So ha, I have answered your PATHETIC questions!

Good story so far, one of the best Dib/Tak stories I've found, but I have a request to make. Please don't make Dib or Tak completely OOC for the sake of the story. Dib should probably be at least a little miffed at having his heart broken and being betrayed by Tak, not falling over himself to help her or something. By the same token, Tak shouldn't turn all sweet and angellic, or cry.

I don't really think you will do something like this, as they have been very ic so far, but you can never be too careful.

And now I leave you with this time-honored line: Update soon, please! ;)

you did both

1)NoroLimAsfaloth

2)NoroLimAsfaloth

Well, A title might be Tak's Revenge, but nah...

Good story :D

You better continue this!
As for a new title... Um, Assasin Tak

I have an idea for a name, such a great NAME! Um... hows about Milkballs! 'S an awsome name.
1. Tak Strikes Back
2. Tak from Beyond
3. Vengence to a Fool

I have to say, I found Dib's reaction to Zim informing him that an Irken ship had shown up that neither of them knew about somewhat underwhelming. Of course, he was kinda distracted by Mysterious Mysteries. I kinda picture him finishing his show and then musing about what Zim was talking about, putting two and two together and then kicking himself in the ass when he realizes what he missed the first time. Could be funny...

Eh... thing is, I generally base my titles around a specific theme in the story. The only thing I could think of was Of Love and War... but it might have a bit more impact if it were made funny somehow... so Maybe Of Love, War, and Doom?

Eh... I don't know. Good job so far. I'll be waiting...

Chris, DT

I LUV DATRs. YOu see them kinda like I do.
please continue.

UDATE PLESE!

i really like alica (spelling?) i hope you up date soon i finally read this story i have been meaning to for ever

Greetings Pirate Monkey, er, NoroLimAsfaloth, May credit be given where credit is due. I’m not exactly good at coming up with names so I must decline in giving a suggestion. Dib seems a little, um…uninterested at the prospect of another Irken on Earth. Was it because he didn’t believe Zim? Or perhaps he just didn’t want to miss the Mysterious Mysteries show he was watching? I look forward to reading your next instalment. - Ashsema

Greetings Pirate Monkey, Geez, the tallest are certainly evil creatures, but I guess that’s in keeping with all Irkens, isn’t it. The Tallest just have more power to play with. Good beginning, I am anxious to see where this goes. - Ashsema

when the next chapter

Yeah, isn't the hair spike sentence awesome? I put that in...