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So here's Nakida's debut. Wow! I really liked this story. One talent that I haven't interally developed yet is creating OCs and you've done an amazing job with Nakida. You gave us a clear view of her past, her family, and how she became so smart. I also liked finally getting a clear image of what she and Sonia look like.

I also liked this because it was a Cyborg story. Not many people are able to pull off Cyborg's stories. What you have here is a story that is both touching and intralling in how you brought up Cy's anger towards his dad. When you brought up his background, you did it with the feel that it should have. Great Work!

Lastly, I liked a lot of the morals that were in this story. That's a hobby of mine, I think when I read. It's something that I look for in stories and it impacts how I think of the story as well. You did a great job in portraying a lot of morals and values at the end of the story, so awesome work!

All in all, Great Story! And keep writing!

Later!

~Rena

PS. Cat was really cool! :-D

I'm a little confused which one is real and which one is the hologram? So..no wait, Nakida's the girl and Sonia's the hologram? Sorry, this is kind of confusing to me.

So the lab was called BTO in the last chap right? Where did you get B.I.R.L.? I'm not trying to sound critical, I'm just curious.

It got a little shaky in parts but you managed to pull it off nicely. well done.

Hm, intrestring. But why does she have a hologram for a partner? And how is it that Nakida (I think that's the right one) know about the Teen Titans?

Well that ending was kind of disapointing I mean it really didn't make mush sense for that Cat character to just turn like that so suddenly.

But overall you really do have some talent, it's a bit rough and you need a bit of work on your endings (like with that one with Kurt)but all you need is more practice, I mean I've certainly improved over time the more I've written myself. I really do like your ideas and I think you got some great skills just like your sister has.

I really hope you continue on writing cause really does need more talented writiers like you and your sister. I'll try and get to your other stuff and I know I'll like them too. Keep up the writing and trust me you really do got some talent and it would be such a shame if you stopped. Trust me you should enver question your talent.

I mean I do that too and it only brings me down so I just get back up and then try to improve myself all the time. I beleive in your skills and your work and I look forward to reading many new stories that you come up with. Who know maybe you and your sis coudl one day do one together lol. Just an idea well anyway I'm glad that Cy found love in this fic and maybe one day you can do a sequel where she joins them full time as a hero with her mind and make a suit or something and you can show how much their relationship has evolved.

That was an intense chapter you made there, had a lot of everything in that and I liked it. From that little bit on what really makes you human to the end there. Nice reference to the Egyptian goddess Bastet, does that mean that that island is close to Egypt?

LMAO! DAX! I loved that and the wormhole part too! Nice to see another fan of that DS9 show too. I liked the date too and he fits in well in that crowd.

Ororo Warren and Evan Daniel? Sorry but do you take names of other charachters to use caues I keep thinking of X-Men Evolution on hearing that lol. Maybe it's just me. Although I think you rushed a few things like her just making all those adjustments to his body without asking, not sure he would like some stranger messing with his body like that.

But I do kind of like the pairing you got going.

Nice start of a fic you got, I liked the descriptions you put in too and the little background was just enough to get the reader insteresting. Very nice.

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Hey, it's me. I was just reading your reviews for this story (I couldn't remember if I reviewed since I said I'd read it) and I saw how that one reviewer ripped you apart. I think it was so rude. Not everything can be perfect. I thought that it was cute even if there were spelling errors. The errors in my Rurouni Kenshin story were really bad and really obvious at times. Don't worry about that review. I though that the story was adorable!
Little Sakura-chan

This is very sweet and cute, its a great pairing. Good job!

1.) Spelling is poor. It's genius, not genuis, diagnosis, not dinostics, functional not fuctinol, hologram, not holgram, /scientist/, not your mutilated spelling, cybernetic not cypernetic, anonymous, not announamous, multiplies, sushi, disobeyed, carnival, musical... and that's just the first two chapters. Some difficulties with homonyms. A minuet is a court dance of the 1600's; a minute is a measurement of time. Grammar needs some work. Plurals are indicated by the adding of -s (or -es, -ies etc), not 's, which indicates possession. Alot does not equal a lot. Add a space after Ms, Mr., Mrs., etc. If you're sixteen, you should know that by now. Get a spell checker or something.

2.) Doctor /Silas/ Stone.

3.) Romance is way too fast. They go from strangers to omg, tru wuv!!1 in one chapter flat.

4.) OMG, shez s0 h0ttiz!1 Tone it down. I find it awfully silly that you find it necessary to make her look like she just fell out of the heavens or something. For once I'd like to find an original character with a mutilated face and one eye...

5.) The other characters are OOC--out of character. There is more to them than being "goth", the practical joker, etc.

6.) Frankly, I don't care how much of a "genuis" she is--unless it was a last resort, no sane person would leave their life in the hands of a thirteen year old girl. It takes years for people to go through medical school, learning how to operate on people without getting squirmish, so on forth. A child of thirteen, no matter how smart, is still a child.

7.) Cat girls. Cliche!

I made it to chapter four and then I couldn't go on any more.

*SPORKS*

Sorry I never read it before...its really good! But does everyone think that Robin and Starfire are really that close? (NOT your story...your disclaimer) I mean, it doesn't actually show romance...in fact the only thing that Starfire MIGHT just really like Robin is when Blackfire is staring into his eyes and she says "H!'
By da way...can you PLEASE choose a story from my list in my bio. There's so many...

You're quite enthusiastic, aren't you?!
I think you're pretty good...really! But why don't you (just a suggestion) try another category? I think you should try Danny Phantom, or maybe an anime one if you like them. Such as Zoids or Cyborg 009. Or just stuff you like! You don't have to, but you're so witty - it'd be a shame to waste it just on TT readers! Expand your stories! Let others see your talent.
Oh, my gosh. That sounded SO lame. But it's true!