Ah, I read this elsewhere and loved the idea. Will you please continue it?

I can't believe you leave such a cliffy and not update in nearly a year!

*blushes softly*

Okay, so I am as guilty of that sin as you. But, please update. And make it soon.

maybe it's just the fact that i am not a big drinker myself, but the thought that sarah, or anyone, would need courage from a bottle is a little bit sad.

that's just me though.

This is a great story so far, I'm really looking forward to seeing how everything turns out. on that note- more please?

I love it! More? Please?

I loved this fic, however I would suggest a better sumary I only got here because another author that I like recomended it, The story so far is nostalgic and nice, I will be waiting for the next chapter :) Bye.

I really like this so far. Please write more soon.

OH My! this is the most well written and original plot i have read in a very long time.. please .. as you posted the first two chapters on my birthday .. please as an extra present to me.. lol.. would you update this amazing story.. i can literally see this world you have painted so vividly.. i am almost too tense from wanting the next chapter to write this review.. lol.. my head is screaming update update update.. lol.. as a writer i know what it is to get stuck or be held up by a beta but for the love of the underground .. please.. update..lol..

Good combo of detail and pace. I'm really loving this so far, I can't wait to read more. Very well-written and well thought out. More?

I'm looking forward to seeing more chapters. This is wonderful.

I love this story - It's really beautiful, and captures the charaters perfectly. Thank you!

A very good start. I can't wait for more. :)

Bravo! Great pace - good use of detail to draw us in. I'm looking forward to seeing how this one turns out!

I love your story, it seems very quick paced, and I can't wait to see what happens next. The thought of Jareth eating Hot Dogs/Mac and cheese would be very amusing. It is an interesting idea to have Sarah to 'live' in the Labrynth the way that she did-I can't wait to read her explanation to Jareth, please update soon. :)

This is an amazing story!