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Megan Consoer
2008-02-03
ch 1,
abuseI really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
fireflies-flicker
2006-12-30
ch 1,
abuseI love how Severus sounds so desperate when he's like "Hermione, we should leave now."

short but sweet.
great job.
hello
2006-01-24
ch 1, anon.
abuseDO NOT SEND THIS BACK TO THE PERSON THAT SENT YOU IT![not a good idea]

DO THIS ITS SOO FREAKY

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most people aren't sure of what they really want in life.

I received this letter from a friend on the computer, did what it told me to, and within a week, everything I had wished came true!! Here's an exact copy, this really works!

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1. To yourself, say the name of the only guy or girl you wanna be with 3 times!

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2. Think of something you wanna accomplish within the next week and say it to your self

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3. If you had 1 wish what would it be? say it to yourself 9 times!

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4. Think of something that you want to happen between you and that 1special person and say it to your self 12 times!

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5. Now, heres the hard part! Pick only 1 of these wishes and as you scroll down focus and concentrate on it and think on nothing else but that wish.

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Now make one last &final wish about that one wish

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After reading this, you have 1 hour to send it out to 15 people, and what you wished for will come true within in one week!

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u only get one chance! Now scroll down and think of your crush!

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Did you think of your crush? I hope so, that was

your last chance. Now pay very close attention this important message!

Sorry but once read, must be sent. Yes, this is one of those kinda chain

letters that everyone hates. This one has been going since 1863 and if you break this chain, you will pay! Remember that after hearing

these stories.

First Example:

Take Barbra Wallace.. She was a pretty lucky girl, up till she got this same chain letter. She had a crush on the same kid since kindergarden. when she got this mail she didn't pay any attention to it. She just thought, no big deal. And deleted it. The next day her dad got fired and her mom dies in a 1. car crash. If she would have sent the letter none of that would have happened and her mom would be alive.

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Try Freddie D. Now Freddie D. was your average nerd. Had glasses, was short and chubby, was in gifted. All the signs of your total dork. He also received this letter and sent it to 51 people in the hour. Now, like Barbra, he had a crush on a girl since 3rd grade. The next day after sending the chain the girl confessed her love for him ever since 3rd grade. Freddie D. finally had the courage to ask her out, and of course, she had been waiting to yes to that for years. They grew up and married each other to live happily forever.

Third Example:

Now if you couldn't relate to the others, this'll get ya hooked. Listen to this. A kid named Jordan Johnson was just getting on AOL to check his mail. He was a quiet kid, not that popular but not a geek either. he was just normal. He saw he had mail from his friend. It was this exact letter. Now Jordan Johnsen was a smart kid and he knew what could happen if he didnt pass it on. He simply pulled a few friends from his buddy list and sent it along. The next day, about that same time, he got a phone call. It said he had won the lottery! then his dad came home and bought him a new bike! His mom bought him Nintendo64 and play station! His grandmother sent him a new computer, and his best friend gave him tickets to the concert he wanted to go to, Kid Rock and Limp Bizkit! Then he inherited a brand-new tv from his aunt! He was goin' wild! the next day his secret crush asked him out, and they have been going out ever since.

Now, you heard the stories.

I know which person i'd rather be, but thats up to you. I wouldn't wanna end up like Barbra but thats only me. We all want what we cant have but now's ur chance to go out with that special somebody ur waiting for. Take it or leave it. If you send this to-

1 person- you will lose all luck in ur love

life...forever!

10 people- your crush will say they like you as a

friend...ONLY!

15 people- your crush will say they like you

20 people- your crush will ask you out!

25 people- your crush will kiss you!!

30 people - Your crush

will have sex with you

pressing the button at the bottom of this bulletin will automatically post it to all of your friends and all of the above will come true, this is real!

Don't blow it, it's ur chance to shine! Have everything u wanted, and more! Now, complaining cus u dont have any friends. Well theres an answer 4 everything. It's simple, just go in a chat room, pick some names and send away! but here's the catch...you only have one hour to send it after being read. Please pass this to

everyone you.. know
NO SEND BACKS!
Sorry!
Dafina
2005-11-18
ch 1,
abuseI found this while looking at your list of Labyrinth fics. I'm going to read those now, but I just wanted to say how cute this was. Such a great little one-shot. :D And it's especially nice since it doesn't contain any spelling/grammar mistakes!
mischievalmind
2005-10-08
ch 1,
abuseVery cute, but very over-rated! it did not need an M at all. I have heard worse then that on prime time tv, during the family hour programs.
SaerinSedai
2005-05-22
ch 1,
abuse*arches an eyebrow*

Methinks you have a thing for Hermione/Snape romances, eh? ;)

Anyways, this is really funny! Hee, I can just imagine the following action...though, considering Snape's 68, I'd really prefer not to. :P
Melindotty
2004-12-06
ch 1,
abuseHEHEHEHEHEH... naughty naughty!
enlightenedkitty
2004-11-28
ch 1,
abuseOhh, that one made me squee for joy! Very cute.
amsev
2004-09-11
ch 1,
abuseHee-hee. Very diverting. Heh! I know *I'd* want to drag the Potions Master away from that party very quickly!
Midnight Lady
2004-08-24
ch 1, anon.
abuse*giggle* that was cute.
Ethereal-Athan
2004-08-23
ch 1,
abusehi, it's me again..my computer has been..ill for the longest time, I was missing you're work..I'm al excited now, this is looking good can't wait to read more!
Ethereal-Athan
2004-08-23
ch 1,
abusehi, it's me again..my computer has been..ill for the longest time, I was missing you're work..I'm al excited now, this is looking good can't wait to read more!
pippagethetook
2004-08-23
ch 1,
abusegiggles.

Even though I didn't need to think about Snape and Hermione! TEEHEE
Wile
2004-08-22
ch 1,
abuseCute!
droxy
2004-08-22
ch 1, anon.
abusevery cute, made me laugh, she has her priorities straight
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