that was absolutely adorable :D. Nice writing. Por widdle tomite... ;D

poor tomite. :(

AW! I love Tomite! He's my favorite Genbu character!! Personally I want Takiko to be with him and not Uruki! I love the story! It made me feel so sorry for Tomite. But to critique (is that how you spell it?) just a little bit; it was a bit repetitious of how "weak and wimpy" Tomite is. It really came across as self pitty than anything and he sounded like an emo kid. But other than that, I really enjoyed and I'm looking forward to more of your work especially if you write more on Genbu Kaiden!

Aw this is so cute ^^ I've only read till book 3 right now and I like Rimudo as much as Tomite~ I think he deserves more of Watase's attention... anyways, great fic =)

This was surprisenly good. And I mean that as a compliment. I don't usually read Genbu Kaiden fics. I've only read ruff translations of it so I don't really feel comfortoble doing so. But this fic caught my eye and I'm really glade I read it. It's a wonderful looking into Tomite, one that's origional but still true to character. I think that you really captured that side of him. Wonderful.

You have my utmost adroation. So cute, kind of sad, and wonderful.

Oh, poor Tomite-kun. He's such a sweetie when he's not being a jerk. I

Kawaii! I like rimudo myself but now, i started to feel for Tomite, too... ^_^

Eek! How cute! Tomite is my favorite in Genbu Kaiden X3 Soo cute...

-Houjun Ri (Didi)

Meh.. poor Tomite. T.T You really like him though, don't you? Isn't this your second fic on him? I always thought Hikitsu died first. XD But guess it was Tomite.

that was cute!