its sweet. Poor Link. I hope he made a good choice.

and I really wonder how Zelda is going to react to his rejection.

Bucky.

I Love it! I like songfics. They're weird, but often sad and always, if written correctly (like yours), wicked cool.
Me lovey. It would be, "Me likely," but this is more colorful. I like Link, as usual.
. . . yeah.

I'm coming towards the conclusion that songfics are good, or atleast when done right. This obviously fills the criteria to a overwelming degree, or maybe I'm just negligent in this trade. Oh well, regardless, great work, keep it up!

I love your songfics! Very nice! I know I haven't reviewed in a while, but I'm back from hibernation, lol! Keep going with the songfics! They have depth and they're really cute! Love it, I love it ^_^! Thanks for every one of your reviews for basically all of my stories! I will be back...with another review!

--evanesced-twilight04

Mwahahahaha!
I wrote this un-signed so you can erase it if you want.

Ok, first, I sure wish I knew what Beta-reading is, I assume it's like proof reading?

second, if you think I'm going to give you my email, you're nuts.

third, if you think that my story has so many problems, why do you continue to read it?
Can you answer that questiion? Obviously you obviously like it, or else you wouldn't keep reading and offer help to someone who, for all you know, could be eighty years old! *snort*
You should realize by now I'm stubborn and won't change anything.

Sorry if I wasted your time.

fell free to erase this -MWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!

I can be an evil smarty-pants if I want...

Hello, you read my story, so I read yours.
It was very nice.
So many questions!
Ok, first, I have no idea how I spelled Meghan wrong, to tell you the truth that is my name. (Maybe I shouldn't have told you that...)
ANYWAY...
That excerpt means:
"Hey Link,(an expression to get one's attention) your Life meter (I do believe you know what that is) is down (It's low) Let me see (i'm going to check) if I have some potion (potion replenishes health, and this particular blue potion also does Magic)..."(means continued with an action)Meghan aged (means she looked through) her backpack (means a pack that holds things on your back.)she held out (extended her hand) blue potion (said that already) to him (to Link)
I hope that clears some stuff up. I think my computer has a brain problem, though. things get spelled wrong even though I have word. and I proofread things, too. *sigh*

and about the helpless part, if you'd just read the third chapter, then you'll know about it. It really helps to read. :) ;) -.- O.o *.*

Shweet!
Your a Regular Amy Lee with the song thing *wink*
keep'em comin Atchikanater!

Van Helsing 900

~Ditch~

i love this story! i know the songs called time but it whould be a nice name if it was some day...well good work!

It was clever - VERY... like the imagination put into this one (for a girl) heh.

I was able to imagine everything needed from the field and into the castle. The song was a great way to know his heart while his head was working in the other direction.

Great way to communicate with the ocarina and ring in the hat as a message both as a gentleman and a promise not broken but put to a possible new one.