This was cute.

*applauds* WONDERFUL! I love it, it's really well done. Normally, I'm not into shonen-ai, just the harder stuff, but this is GREAT!

Sunburn gel. Shirtless Hakkai. Gojyo giving him a massage. *Faints*

I WUVED IT! >W

Very sweet! I liked how Gojyo took the role of the healer. ^_^

585 4-ever! ^_^

Vey nice one-shot. I thoroughly enjoyed it. ^_^

Ahh so cute I enjoyed it a lot!!

Hey, I just wanted to say: Great story! It's a very original use of sunburns, although I feel for poor Hakkai's back. Thank you for recommending me your fic, I was starting to fear there were no Gojyo/Hakkai fics around.

Incredible. Just beautiful. Great how they didn't end up in bed, too.

Gojyo nursing Hakkai. Not something we see as often as the other way around. XP This is very sweet. Please write more soon!

o,o you and the way you know how to hit fangirly buttons. Very cute idea, adorable in execution, and ... well, my gosh you're sneaky ^.- Absolutely wonderful, in that awkward and friendly way that really makes Gojyo/Hakkai a sweet, bumbling sort of pairing. You did quite well ^^

I enjoyed this. It was a good story. Thankyou for sharing.

Once again here we go with: Becky knows what Chelsea is going to say. This is because Chelsea is talking to Becky right now and reading the story at the same time. But because Becky asks, or demands, a review, Chelsea will be a good friend and write one for her. ^^
I never knew that putting aloe vera lotion of someone could be so erotic. Like I said before: "Bad Gojyo! Bad, naughty Gojyo for teasing Hakkai's nipple like that." We learned at Deep Image that mens nipples are more sensitive than womens, Hakkai's reaction is understandable. I have to say that I'm glad Gojyo didn't procede to 'medicate' Hakkai's lips. Aloe vera + Kissing = Disguisting. Although...I wonder if it would make a nice lube, it would make whosever wenis softer and more supple.
Okay, Chelsea get your mind out of the gutter! Man it's a good thing we're moving back to EMU in two days.

I wandered into this story while I was waiting for more of Kindred Spirits and I must say it's much better written than a lot of fics of this type usually are. The characterization was good, especially the lack of actual screwage on the first night in light of the sunburn. A most satisfying interlude. =]

Heh. Sunburn? Reminds me of how people feel after Sanzo's done with them. ^^;;

Aiee, fluffy and contrived, but contrived in a good way ^^. Although I wonder about the cards 'Kai dealt while Gojyo was out of the room...