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Naitch03
2009-06-06 . chapter 5
Well, you already got points for quoting Batman: The Movie (and the 60's show itself. Batusi indeed...), and your medical descriptions in earlier chapters were supurb. Now you take it up a notch by taking a page out of Homicide- brilliant. Also, great job with the field trip.
comicbooklovergreen
2009-03-20 . chapter 22
Another awesome story. The characters and dialogue were extremely well written. All the dream sequences based on the Adam West show were absolutely hilarious. I also loved how you threw in bits from Friends and The X-Files, two of my all time favorite shows. I'm now officially addicted to this series and can't wait to start reading the fourth installment.
Vanafindiel
2009-03-07 . chapter 18
LOL! Dream or no dream, she whacked him.
Vanafindiel
2009-03-07 . chapter 16
Does Damien exist in this universe of yours?
Vanafindiel
2009-03-07 . chapter 15
That pinkie promise scene was adorable.
Vanafindiel
2009-03-05 . chapter 9
Aw.
Miravisu
2008-12-09 . chapter 22
One of my favourite scenes (assuming I haven't messed up remembering this from a previous installation in the series):

>“Clark?” Selina replied, no doubt completely caught off guard, “Don’t tell me, Bruce called in the League.”<

*cackles and keels over*
And then the tractor comment.. *rolls on the floor laughing*

This is such a superb series!
roguecatwoman
2006-10-10 . chapter 21
That was AWESOME!! Your whole series has been incredible, but this chapter was just amazing. It flowed beautifully, it remained true to the characters, and it actually brought tears to my eyes thinking of Bruce hanging up his cape and then when his daughter asked if that was Batman he replied "The one and only." Oh man, like a punch to the stomach...gut-wrenching. Great job! I'm looking foward to the next installment.
Alexis
2005-06-25 . chapter 22
Brilliant, absolutely brilliant.

I simply can not wait to see what's in store for the family in your next story.
6StringSamurai13
2005-06-23 . chapter 22
Wow...that's one heck of a epilogue. Perfectly executed and definitely ties up loose ends...and opens up others for exploration later!

Lets see where to start? The beginning scene between Clark and Bruce was well executed. You convey the anxiousness that Bruce is experiencing as he tells his good friend the news of his retirement. Minus the fact that they're both superhero's you'd think this were a regular conversation between two close colleagues at an office. Mattie's appearance does well to cement the reasons for Bruce's retirement to Clark. The dialogue was very fitting.

The scene with Leslie was very appropriate too. Sort of a closing of one door and an opening of another. The bit with having more kids is...interesting. I can just imagine Bruce having to deal with a teenager and another mattie.

I liked Dick's perspective too. It gives us a good idea of what Bruce will be doing from now on as support for Tim and Cass...and maybe Dick? Good to see that Bruce won't be completely out of the game. I wasn't expecting the marriage proposal...but it works!

Hrm...I like Tim's reaction to the news that Dick and and Barb are gonna get married. The typical response from a young man...who is still somewhat unsure about where his relationship with his girlfriend will go. It seems like he realizes that everybody is getting married an living happily ever after, and he's just starting his career as batman. Liked the appearance of montoya and the new comissioner too. Doors close and new ones open...specifically those of the shower variety. Poor poor Tim...feared by night and SCARED to death of his girlfriend walking into the shower.

Hrm...interesting way to start cass's POV. I can definitely tell it's a hint at things to come. I wonder how the two will deal with living with eachother AND fighting crime together. Very interesting to have them take their relationship to this new level...it definitely seems that Cass has been thinking about this for some time. I should have expected that you would throw Bruce into the story to scare the crap out of Tim and Cass...I was laughing my butt off. I can see the faces of shock on Tim and Cass. Best line was definitely "I think it was 65 dollars..." that was such a bruce thing to do. I wonder what he was thinking when the door opened and Cass was there in an oversized tshirt. Selina's closing lines were funny too. I'm positive that a vein in Bruce's forehead was probably threatening to burst.

Hrm...the scene with Jack and Bruce was interesting too. Your story so far has only really focused on the main batclan. His responses, or lackthereof to Bruce's praise was very moving.

The last scene was very well done. Definitely a happy ending for the Dark Knight and his family...and yet it still holds much potential for the future. I can't wait!
Angelic Temptress
2005-06-22 . chapter 22
Great fic. Loved every moment of it.
Tooi ake
2005-06-22 . chapter 22
God I love your stories, they are so awesome. It is just the right mix of action and emotion that makes it so great. Thank you for taking the time to write these and thanks for the sequels!
The Huntress1
2005-06-21 . chapter 22
I've been neglecting my reviews, that's not to say I've been the neglecting the story because I've read it immediately upon discovering uploads every time. I must simply say congratulations on crafting such a level story that covers most--if not every single--base I can think of. While I'm a stickler for more children and would love it if Bruce and Selina had more I guess I'll just have to wait and see. Yours is one of the few fan fics I still have an avid never ending interest in, thank you for that fact.
Purest Poison
2005-06-11 . chapter 21
Such a great chapter, it really was.
Angelic Temptress
2005-06-09 . chapter 21
Great. I loved it!
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