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| TannerUzumaki 2008-03-25 ch 1,  | abuseYAY! NARU IS GOING ON A TRIP WOOT! Good job, onto chappy 2! |
| Stygian Styx 2008-02-01 ch 11, | abusegreat story so far, please update soon! |
| Vilkath 2007-09-09 ch 6, | abuseInteresting chapter, but I got to say the bit with Temari seemed a little over done. I can see Naruto being upset about losing control. Killing is bad enough, but it's something you always want to have firm control over. On the other hand, I sort think everyone else's reactions was a bit over board, since it seemed like Temari's attack was aiming to kill. What else can you call hurican winds slaming some one into several hard objects, then slaming some large hard objects into them like a sandwich? In fact just about all the Naruto world attacks 'aim' to kill.. they just fail to due to various skills of hte people. |
| ADD Kyuubi Naruto 2007-07-24 ch 11, | abuseTRAITOR WHY DID U STOP WRITING |
| KagomeGirl021 2007-04-29 ch 11, | abuseoh this is good! update again soon!! i wanna know what the other rookie 9 think of naruto's new strength. ^_^ |
| magicalbrat 2007-01-27 ch 11, | abusegood story interesting plot turns |
| Black-Hood 2006-12-31 ch 11, | abuseYo! good stuff so far, Tatsumaki is probably my favorite OC in a Naruto fic ever, so congrats, she seems so much more ... real than most of the Mary Sues out there... I really hope they end up together, I wonder tho, Naruto's rage seems to make him weaker, as he wasnt 'Kyuubi' ** when he was blocking Hinata's fathers blows... and he is by far stronger than any pissant no name teme thats going after Tatsumaki's hand in marriage... maybe the break between prelims and finals should bring that under control, along with some new happy happy jutsus... with a clear mind and some new powerful toys, the finals should be great! |
| chineseartist 2006-11-13 ch 11, anon. | abusewow, unexpected! but i like it, it's cool. keep up the good work and update soon, onegaishimasu! |
| wowed 2006-11-10 ch 11, anon. | abuseholy dang man this was the best story i have read in so long that i had to review on this. You have the greatest idea and a wonderfull way of telling it. Keep it up and it will rank one the the best all time fics for naruto. |
| FFz 2006-08-11 ch 11, | abusedid you uhh drop off the face of the earth? |
| LbcLostKid 2006-08-11 ch 9, | abuseUPDATE SOON! |
| LbcLostKid 2006-08-11 ch 10, | abuseUPDATE SOON! |
| japanese-jew 2006-08-05 ch 11, | abuseWhen did Naruto take his weights off? |
| The Group of One 2006-07-05 ch 11, | abuseO.o ohmygods... very interesting story you have so far. I like that one chapter title... what was it? Kakashi, get out of my fridge! or something. xD Brilliant. ::goes off to bait a certain pervert into going into her bedroom:: heehee... Update? |
| revenga 2006-05-25 ch 1, anon. | abusei havent read i single word but im guessing this is a naruhina fic. |