Just read one of the Death Note fics, and your bio said you loved Aeris, so I was ecstatic when I saw this. Cloud/Aeris is mah FFVII OTP, and they're so well-written! It's such a sweet fic, you should consider writing more of them. :)

*throws love at you*

aww... so sweet. I think that you've really captured Cloud and Aeris' spirit for time memorial. Rock on!

WOW DEEP, THATS SO GOOD I WISH SHE DIDNT DIE OH WELL I CAN THRIVE ON THESE STORIES TO BELIVE SHES ALIVE AND WITH CLOUD

:: trembles in excitement :: Wah~!! this is such a good, short fic! Aerith is...just how I imagined! You are really good! Yes, I figure Aerith can act childful at times(actually she always does)and there are times when she just acts so...mysterious and mature, that's what makes me like her. Of course, add Cloud in it makes it better! Love your fic!! I hope you write more of these! Please!

*sniffles* This is so prettiful... *sigh* It made me all teary-eyed. And Cloud kissed her. *wub* You're really talented, do write more fics! Cleris forever!

Ah, sweetness.

You managed to portray Cloud and Aeris well enough to make them work in this sort-of-couple moment. I really liked the tone, sweet yet sad. The end added an increasingly poignant feeling. I loved the little understanding that just clicked between them; you wrote it well. Hm, nicely done. ^^ Nothing to critique except some misspellings and typos -- as well as what Sabe already mentioned. Though it doesn't catch 'em all, don't forget that handy spellchecker! I know it helps me out a lot. ^^;; {grins}

Write on, Serria!

Jess 0:o)

Quite good.

Aww...the sweet fluffiness...So sad...So perfect...You're very good at describing the emotions and scenery...More please!! ^.^

Hm. As a rule, almost, I never read Cleris(es?)... *chuckles* but I found your link on the LJ FF7writer community, and thought I'd surf over.
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It was definitely worth the time; this little vignette would fit beautifully into the game, and was a lovely thing to read. I especially enjoyed your characterization of Aeris and her dialogue; it sounds very natural, and holds just the right amount of strength and vulnerability. My only critique was that some of your imagery seemed a little cliche'd - the moonlit night, the brilliant stars - though, mind you, the next line you had me chuckling with Cloud's complaint ("too damn bright.") so perhaps, never mind that. Though I *did* like the idea of the tree, and Aeris and Cloud's different reactions to it; it displayed subtle differences in their characters that you pulled off quite well.
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In any case, keep up the great work, and keep writing!
~Sabriel.

aw... Cloud and Aeris make such a nice couple... good fic ^.^