 Etomacity 12/12/11 . chapter 1I know this story is old, but I still wanted to say something. This was a wonderful read. It is one I surely will come back and reread a few times because it is just that good. It is truly well written. Thank you for writing. |
 LeonaWriter 5/22/11 . chapter 1Ooh, just now looking at publish date, I can tell it's old... but. It's very good. They're kept in character, and those last few paragraphs- Bakura seeing his family again - were very moving. |
 DarkShadowRose1 2/23/11 . chapter 1I am so glad that this was wrote! Bakura deserved a better ending than what he got, and this is so amazing! Loved it! |
 sweetiepie08 2/4/11 . chapter 1Great story! The way you described how Bakura was feeling was so good, I could feel it myself. (does that sentence make sense? it's late where I am.) Anyway, good job. |
 PurpleWildcat2010 2/4/11 . chapter 1Oh. My. Ra. Though I've never read the manga, I could still just as easily picture this happening at the end of the anime as well. This was...the perfect ending, in a way. And I really could see Atemu doing this. I've always believed that Bakura is redeemable, just remove Zorc's influence from him, help him get over his need for vengeance, and he wouldn't be so bad...I especially like the ending, where he says, "We have the rest of our eternal afterlives to make up for it." XD
Could you perhaps write another one...maybe where they all get together and...I dunno, have fun? Please?
This was awesome! ) |
 TexasDreamer01 10/6/10 . chapter 1"Atemu gives the Scales a look that says plainly, 'If you are not in my favor, there will be pain.'" *lmao* leave it to atemu to glare at a holy object in the middle of his soul being weighed. XD
brittney |
 Ryou VeRua 6/7/10 . chapter 1Ah, closure - I love it. I feel like I've read this before, but shame on me for not reviewing it then! I'll say what I've found myself saying way too many times... I wish this had actually happened! |
 anonymous XD 2/8/10 . chapter 1 *sniffle* *tears up* soo sweet D |
 Neitherworld 1/25/10 . chapter 1Shoot you? Why would I do that? *Hides gun*
Moving, I love this. I really do. I don't usally read oneshots either. I love the ending it makes me so warm and fuzzy inside. And for once, I don't mind. I like this ending better. Much better than the manga. Great job!
-Neitherworld |
 ship-in-a-bottle 8/18/09 . chapter 1Nice! I liked it. |
 Always a Bookworm 3/23/09 . chapter 1*Sighs in satisfaction* That was a great ending for them. It left me feeling all warm and fuzzy inside! Thanks for the great read! |
 The Lunar Rainbow 2/28/09 . chapter 1Awh! This was wonderful!
Such a happy ending; it made me smile. :D |
 xforeverforgottenx 10/22/08 . chapter 1very original and well done! finally some better closure huh? :D |
 chibi heishi 10/2/08 . chapter 1ALRIGHT! *cheers madly* Bakura AND his village got their happy ending! |
 HieiWannabe 5/6/06 . chapter 1That was so good, I started crying! I especially loved the part where you had Atemu's scales tilting back and forth. It's so nice to see people acknowledging all the bad things he's done, along with the good. I like to think it was only his decision to save Bakura that made them even out. After all, a pharoah has a duty to protect his people, even from himself and his followers. Both Atemu and his father failed to do that, and it's about time they fixed that! |