 Gaeriel Mallory 2002-03-03 . chapter 1This is great! One problem I've had with the JL cartoon is the lack of involvement of the subcharacters of each hero. Bravo. |
 MrManiac 2001-03-14 . chapter 1Good story. can“t wait to see the cartoon |
 Kylime 2001-02-27 . chapter 1I like how you connected the JLA through Lois. The characters were dead on. I hope you write more about the animated JLA. |
 AssassinGalaxia 2001-02-10 . chapter 1 Cute. I like it. |
 Tracey Claybon 2001-02-07 . chapter 1This was REALLY entertaining. I like how you blended the TAS universe with the action of the comic universe... You did it in the right style, too - this flowed like a episode, and I kept coming back to it during the day while I worked- like I did with the Batman and Superman TAS series.
Thank you for reminding me of WHY I liked the TAS world. |
 Louie Pastiche 2001-02-06 . chapter 1 Great story! I'm just wondering if the actual cartoon will have (tuxedo-clad) Zatanna, as well. |
 Mike Acord 2001-02-06 . chapter 1 Very nice work. It creates the sense of the animated world quite well. Carefully avoiding commitment to unknown factors (Which Green Lantern are we talking about?)and making educated guesses about others.Very nice visual sense. I could see this as animated or live action quite easily. Logical plot development and solid resolution. |
 Eileen 2001-02-06 . chapter 1Very nice! I could almost hear the voices in my head as I read. You should write a follow-up or two. |
 Adrian Tullberg 2001-02-06 . chapter 1 Pretty good stuff ... could visualise Timm's work ... |