 Gaeriel Mallory 3/3/02 . chapter 1This is great! One problem I've had with the JL cartoon is the lack of involvement of the subcharacters of each hero. Bravo. |
 MrManiac 3/14/01 . chapter 1Good story. cant wait to see the cartoon |
 Kylime 2/27/01 . chapter 1I like how you connected the JLA through Lois. The characters were dead on. I hope you write more about the animated JLA. |
 AssassinGalaxia 2/10/01 . chapter 1 Cute. I like it. |
 Tracey Claybon 2/7/01 . chapter 1This was REALLY entertaining. I like how you blended the TAS universe with the action of the comic universe... You did it in the right style, too - this flowed like a episode, and I kept coming back to it during the day while I worked- like I did with the Batman and Superman TAS series.
Thank you for reminding me of WHY I liked the TAS world. |
 Louie Pastiche 2/6/01 . chapter 1 Great story! I'm just wondering if the actual cartoon will have (tuxedo-clad) Zatanna, as well. |
 Mike Acord 2/6/01 . chapter 1 Very nice work. It creates the sense of the animated world quite well. Carefully avoiding commitment to unknown factors (Which Green Lantern are we talking about?)and making educated guesses about others.Very nice visual sense. I could see this as animated or live action quite easily. Logical plot development and solid resolution. |
 Eileen 2/6/01 . chapter 1Very nice! I could almost hear the voices in my head as I read. You should write a follow-up or two. |
 Adrian Tullberg 2/6/01 . chapter 1 Pretty good stuff ... could visualise Timm's work ... |