omg please tell me if i beg you'll finish this story coz i'm BEGGING PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY :(

oh my god! this is so funy! please update soon, i want to see what happens!

i will review coz i wAnt u 2 keep writing!
enjoying this and i would like to see a happy d/c ending!

Oh my gosh! As a nursery attendant/Girl Scout councillor, this is definentally bringing back memories kicking and screaming! Very good, and I love what you've done with both Cordi and Doyle! And Doyle's alive! Yay! Please continue!

Celebwen Telcontar

hmm, no more? uthat's dissapointing.

what's going to happen next, you have to write more!

loved it! interesting idea for a story. can't wait for the rest.

you gotta keep going. I know you havent updated in a long time, but please, you gotta!

Its a good story, I like it. Keep posting and I'll keep reading.

what's going to happen next??

Please please update this is such a good story!

Flames Out
Dragon

Hey awesome story so please write more and update.

Ek, so sorry about the late review, but I went to France for seven weeks! And when I came back I had the flu! But it's all cool now, and I'm catching up on the 53 author alerts I have... ugh, I'll never survive, I really won't!

As usual, I loved this chapter. You write their characters, even while they're so young, so well! the other ones, the old ones, are really well done too. And just the image of Angel with a foam beard is hilarious. They should have done that on the show. But poor little Cordy having visions! That's gotta be tough on her little head. You've got to write more, okay, but this story is really starting to get momentum, or whatever. I love it!

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Pause and Rewind
Crayon Wars and Superhero Parents

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Oh, this is fab! I've just caught up with the whole thing and ... *squeals in delight* it's just so CUTE! I love ickle Doyle and Cordy! But, on a slightly more serious note, it's also really well thought out and I can't wait to find out what's gonna happen - hope there's more soon! :)