creepy...

I love writing strange alternate universes! I hope this was as fun to write as it was to read.

so sad. Makes you question what reality is, huh?

O wow, you gotta continue this, it is so interesting really, thinking about that type of thing, espeacially since your not sure which thing is a waking reallity, or dream, whatev

Oh wow! Definitely trippy but interesting to think about. I really like the writing style of this too!

I rather like this story! i would liek to see more if there is any.

Write on!

Celtic-Dragon-89

I really really liked this. I've read it twice over, and still love it

Wow, that's hard to puzzle out, gives me a lot to think on. That was a great story. Now I must go think on this.

wow. that was really cool. definately keep going with this.

Oh, so you leave it up to the readers imagination, I see. Well you didn't ofend me, I loved it!

wow you did this so much better than i did. i gues i will keep writing mine, though it seems kind of pointless now.

one thing, when a person is in a Coma, they do not move, (at least i don't think so) they are just like vegetables. they don't process anything and just live their life with a machine. personally, i would rather die then have that happen to me for the rest of my life. coma is also not an imbalance of chemicals, THAT goes with depression and eating disorders. though im not entirly sure about comas.

that was a great story, i liked that it was artistic. very different. great job!

wow...very nice...its very different from the other version that's out by another author..i like em both a lot...can't wait to see where this is going...i have to say, i hope d/n stay in their tortallan lives cuz you just can't beat that! just so long as they end up that way, you know? update soon! _