Ooh update this one! there's major seks blossoming between them. the sexual tension is thicker than the scent of rotting intestines. Nah I'm kidding. But please update.

... *speechless*... well that was.. different. Good but disgusting none the less. i didn't know people could be hung up by their spines... *shiver* well.. keep going, i don't know if i'll keep reading it, i usually do but good job

chapter 3 plz (puppy dog eyes that neva fail!)

that was really good plz hurry with the nevt chapters!

he was hung by his own spine? gross but kinda cool in a gory-disgusting way^_^

I like ur ideas for fics hehe so I'll be back next time u update
ciao
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This is a good fic. Update soon please.
Wow, no spelling mistakes either, you must use spellchecker right? one more thing, why do you perfer to use Raymond for Rei?

Sorry, not complaining, I just think that spelling it 'Rei' makes him more saphisticated (sp?). Oh well, whatever makes ya happy.

Update soon. I wasn't sure if I would like this fic or not, but decided to try it out before I dissmissed it. This is good. Update soon please.

Wow, how many times did I say to 'update'? well, do it soon please!

I had birthday cake today, so I already feel like tossing me cookie's.

that's good update soon

I like this alot. I love hearing Rei and Kai call him Stanley. Update soon.

>.>
same opinion as always I rather like it for an opening chapter
good with the punctuation
so all and all GOODJOB~~

Well...I happen to stumble onto what I think is talent..You have alot of talent for writing. I myself have been writing a book...This first chapter is very introducing...keep working on the next few chapters and good luck! Don't give up either.

Interesting so far. Great job. Can't wait for the next one .