Great story! Of all the fanfics I have read, I think this story most accurately captures Serena's, Darien's, etc. true personalities, and I can actually imagine this plot line being incorporated into the story line. Seriously, in my mind this is the missing Sailor Moon episode... A clever use of drama, romance, humor, and action make the story a real roller coaster ride, and draws the reader into the world you have created. Most of all, I liked the mention to the promise/engagement ring towards the end, and the mention to a wedding at the end. It was a perfect cap to all the craziness, and perfectally summed up Usagi's/Mamoru's feelings for each-other.

Aw I really liked this story. A little confused with the Japanese words, but still great.

i love it

i really liked this story!! It was sweet except one fact-- why the hell did Mamoru agree to dance with lindzey?!?! Is he that ridiculously dumb!? lol just a thought-- mamo-chan should've been like NO! lol

greta story

Really good :) I really enjoyed that chapter.

That was good! I'm really liking this.


Christine

wow...really good! i love it!! but just pointing out he fact that you should skip lines cuz its easier to read that way. im not trying to be mean here

Hey I liked in this how when they were speaking, it sounded as if they were speaking in japenese translated into english (not sure if thats actually what you did), it worked really well.

If you are going to put in some japenese words/sentences in future it would be great if you could put a thing in at the top telling us what they all mean because sometimes i didnt know what they were saying. I also thought that usa acted a bit too babyish in this at times. But overall i really enjoyed the story. It was written very well.

:)

kool! kawaii!

Oh my god! this truly was a great story, i loved from the very first line i read!!thanx for making such an awesome fic, hope you make more!till then!^.~
~Nedz~

this story rocks!!

THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU FOR DOING THIS FOR ME! I ABSOLUETLY LOVED IT AND I THINK WE SHOULD WRITE A SEQUEL! Oh, and I think we should make a fic with us in it, remember what we talked about a few months ago. If not, when you're on next, we'll talk about it.

i enjoyed that story

omg that was amazing! i've been waiting 4 so long 4 more of this story and i wish there could be more!! You're a well good writer keep it up!