Love the story. The format is really interesting.

That was great!

Brilliant. As always! :o)

That was really clever! To tell the truth, I didn't even realize it was in rhyme until the third stanza. ;) I really enjoyed it, and I hope you decide to write more!

AWESOME! I loved how you did the rhyme. And how you managed to find so many alike words and make this long of a story-poem is a feat in itself. : ) And to write it where it makes sense is even better. KEEP IT UP & Keep writing!

ur cyber-pal,

Sharma S. (*Shar)

Hey, that was cool! I liked how you put the story in poem form!