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merissala
2007-04-06 . chapter 1
AW~~ I want a hundred-pager.

But too selfish of me to ask.

You're the one writing it. :D

This was... interesting. Descriptive? Very.
for [1]... what do you have no excuse for?

Anyways~ this wasn't confusing at all... not at all... maybe a little but whatever. Life's confusing, this shouldn't make any difference!~ :D

Hope you have sometime to write/finish that fiction you mentioned at the end.
xwinterbells
2007-01-21 . chapter 1
I loved how the whole onesided Fujicest eventually drove Yuuta to falling for mizuki. The plot was so well-thought out and the ANGST. I love your angsty stories. They're so beautiful T__T
Queenphoenix
2006-04-25 . chapter 1
This story seems really complicated to me, but I like it. You know about Fuji's family? Can you help me with my story? I need to know what Mr and Mrs Fuji are like.
yoshikochan
2005-01-10 . chapter 1
I really liked this... Fujicest is always sad and soft... and I like YuutaMizuki too. =) Loved the pairings, the flow, would be so happy with more of the same! ^__^
Astrael
2004-11-29 . chapter 1
I've had this story on my favorite list for a long time and never got around to reviewing. But now I shall! Ah-ha-ha!

I love this story. The emotion is real, and you have a good understanding of Yuuta and Syusuke's relationship which made the story even more believeable. I loved how the fic ended with the switching of POV's. *applauds* Beautiful ^_^
Jenny-fer
2004-10-02 . chapter 1
*pats poor Yuuta* Ahh.. so cute. I liked how you wrote Mizuki in this, he wasn't as slimey as other people make him. And the one-sided Fujicest... *smile* gotta luv it. And its so angsty! ^^ I usually find angsty one-sided Fujicest from Syuusuke's POV and it's nice to see one from Yuuta for a change. Dang, now I wanna read the long fic... ^^; Awesome fic~!
treana
2004-08-30 . chapter 1
^_^ this story was done extremely well. the writing style was very nice and flowing, and it fit right in with the actual series. yuuta's entire character was portrayed excellently. i also enjoyed mizuki's part very much, and i liked the way you wrote him in.

awesome, awesome ficcie, i really enjoyed reading it ^_^.
S-kat
2004-08-25 . chapter 1
Augh. That was so good. I adore Yuuta, and Fujicest is one of my many Tenipuri OTP-things.

Unrequited makes me sad, but at least Yuuta got action. That's good for something.

All fangirlisms aside, beautiful writing.. It was.. I guess, intense? Emotional? Something like that. I liked the effect at the end- a paragraph about the name he thought of, then a paragraph about Mizuki- and the fact that it wasn't Mizuki he was thinking of at all. Lovely indeed, if not mildly depressing.

Awesome writing. Keep up the great work ^_^.
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