|Reviews for ReWriting Life|
| Sheki Go 8/31/08 . chapter 10
what's this song called?
| Intrepidwarriors 2/24/05 . chapter 10
That was excellent. much worthier of your talents and earlier chapters. keep up the good work...and that little cliffhanger ending was very cute :)
| GargoyleSama 2/24/05 . chapter 10
Prefer this ending. Actually besides Ron and Kim, Drakken and Shego have the best basis for a relationship. They already relate with each other. Though in thier case it is not always well, but nothing is perfect. Why do they kep going back to each other? It can't be just because of the money. Shego could probably get much more from Dementor or Henchco. True, these two aggravate each other to no end, but in the end they always look out for each other.
| Intrepidwarriors 2/10/05 . chapter 9
Please, this is not a flame..forgive me if it appears that way. the story was really good, up to chapter 9 which came across as more of an afterthought. you have the ability of a great writer. so, i think, after seeing what you've produced previously, you could rework chapter 9 to bring it up to par with the rest of your story. need to see more of their courtship. drakken came across as a gentle and loving man but can we see some scenes to show this. a touching moment or two between him and shego. i'm not being cruel to be kind, i'm being cruel cos i want to read another great chapter, not one that leaves me a little "hm..." :)
| xXxKimPossiblexXx 2/10/05 . chapter 9
aw what a sweet story :) i liked i a lot! keep writing more d/s stories! they rock
| xXxKimPossiblexXx 2/10/05 . chapter 8
Whoa! heyy sorry i didnt review to this chapter... i dont think i new you updated :)
Btw good chapter! Now off to the next ONE :D
| GargoyleSama 2/9/05 . chapter 9
A bit of a rushed ending. Openings for a sequal?
| shegal92 2/9/05 . chapter 9
*blushes* Sorry, I knew I was being too jumpy about that. Well, one story down and, like, two or three other ones to finish. Right?
I can't review Just Married and Beyond Chap. 9 because I technically already reviewed it. Or so Fido
says. I really liked it and hurry up with the next chapter. And thanks (maybe) for taking my ideas seriously. But I'm probably wrong about that, too. Whatever, just update. PLEASE?
| shegal92 2/8/05 . chapter 8
Please update soon. I like how cruel you make Shego's
dad. By the way, BALLET WAS MY IDEA! Er, sorry. What I meant to say was, did you take that from me? Just wondering, man you probably think I'm concieted.
| Captain Samantha Lovegood 2/2/05 . chapter 7
Aah! I f you don't keep writing i'll kill you!
(Heh,just kidding. I love it,they HAVE to get married! Cool!)
| Skymouth 12/8/04 . chapter 7
Aw, I hope Shego will change her mind and see that Drakken really is a good catch! You should maybe write a short chapter describing just how Drakken has taken the news of the betrothing and Shego's reluctance.
| shegal92 12/7/04 . chapter 7
Omg! Shego's dad is so evil! Now we all know where she gets it from. I'll be waiting...
| shegal92 12/7/04 . chapter 6
Hm, this chapter seemed a little rushed. Poor Shego, her dad and everything.
| xXxKimPossiblexXx 12/7/04 . chapter 7
lol yes i get it now. i actully got it after i sent your review and i was like "darn it!" because i wanted to review back and tell you i understood. great chapter i am sucha big D/S fan :w00t!: Update soon!
| GargoyleSama 12/6/04 . chapter 1
I would like to say that I do have a limited immunity to the "pout". I helped refine a few of them for some friends. At which point they tried o use them on me ... Didn't work. I taught them everything they knew about them, not everything that I knew. Pouted back and they stopped. There are advantages to being a only child. The "pout" was one of them. :)