Wow, i loved it! Ur writing is perfect, and even though i hated tht rory slept with dean, if this fic would have been the actual story line of the show it would have been great ;)

"But Dean never varies and Jess is never a constant and there isn’t a formula that combines them."-- that was an incredible line. I loved this fic. It was great, and it was how things should have happened.

Keep on writing.

"But Dean never varies and Jess is never a constant and there isn’t a formula that combines them."
My favourite line ever to describe them. I completely love this story and your writing is just amazing.

*sobs* Amazing, totally amazing.

It's great. Really. I loved it.

*applaudes* That was so wonderfully done! Amazing! Heart breaking! It was so so good, i think this is actually the best Jess/Rory fic i've ever read, and i have read a LOT. I don't review people that much, but this fic definitley deserves it! This is how it SHOULD have happened.

*bows at your feet to worship you*
-Lindz

my return to ffnet and my foray into lit is all justified by this piece of fiction. i knew i could count on you for ever-increasing quality and rich metaphors; it just keeps getting better and better. this is now officially my favorite rory/jess post dean-debacle fic. somehow, it's just like I had imagined it. thank you.
ps. i really do envy your restraint. you rock at subtlety and minimalism...

Absolutely totally and utterly brilliant.

I am in awe.

I love it. You're a really good writer. Although I hate that Dean and Rory slept together, I thought you took it and did a good job bringing it back to Jess and Rory.

wow i loved this fic is was just as good as all your other fics. you are the writer that got me hooked on fanfic, pls write some new stories soon, your the best writer i know(seriously, i'm not lying.)

I love this . It's very original and Rory is really Rory in this fic , not Rory Gilmore . Characterization is to a tee . These last two lines sare perfection :

"Blowing on her cup, Rory smiles, because boiling is a cooling process."

I absolutely hate one shots. HATE THEM! But I cannot bring myself to say that about this story. It's amazing. You better have written more...

Oh god that was so good I cried!

This was heartwrenching. I can imagine it playing out in my head and I just start to feel the tears coming. It was beautiful, perfect...I am envious. The last line...perfect. Everything about this fic was so - perfect. I have even more respect for your talent than I did before (and that was a lot). You demonstrate such ease in portraying bare, raw, excruciatingly emotional feelings and confessions. I love you. I can't wait for more of your fiction. I will definitely not miss any of them and read every last one. I would be punishing myself not to.

Unbelievably AWEsome.

~molly~

I love it please update soon! please!