Pretty.

Pretty cute. I like how the lyrics went with the writing. One thing i would suggest though, reread before you post. I know I do the same thing, but two of your words stuck together in the beginning, and that kind of error ALWAYS bothers me. I just thought I'd let you know.

Write hard,
write long,
write until dawn,
~FDW

YAY!! That was cool. Are Malon nad Link in love? Gr . . . rabid animal noise . . . I'm done.
Awesome use of songfiction. Don't recognize the song, but WHO CARES?
Gonna r&r more of ur stories now.

Great work, I love over-poetic madness and allusions/symbolism. Short and to the point with tender feelings. Keep it up!

Oh, what an interesting one-shot! The song was very appropiate; it fit the story quite well! I enjoyed this piece of work. You have a very nice writing style. ^^

- Selah

that was really good.

Sweet songfic! Just so you know, your title has a typo in it which you might want to fix. That's the only thing that threw me off.

I saw in your profile that you like Zelda AU's. I've written a few, and I was wondering if you'd like to give them a chance. I'm going to join your C2 community.

Wonderful story, good emotions, keep up the great work!

Hmm... nice. I have no idea what song you used but it was still good.

Pretty cool!! :)

(cries) So sad! Poor Malon!

The ending was funny with the "Stupid Fairy Boy" said at the end, lol! Great songfic! I liked the lyrics to the song, it seemed to fit well with the story!

Later!
--evanesced-twilight04