That was VERY good. An original idea, well executed.

Nice. I like how you gave the cannon a certian... life. It is interesting. And very, very cool.

Max-O.O;; whoa that matched that fic PERFECTLY was that a hint of STEAMSHIPPING I DETECTED! _ steamsteamsteamsteamsteam

ChibiGaret and chibi Mia-(comes floating by on a river in the background with a giant sign that says UPDATE FOUR KINGDOMS)

Max-

Garet&Mia-(no longer chibis float by again closer with a sign that says UPDATE FOUR KINGDOMS)

Max-

Garet&Mia-(comes up and smacks max)

Max-STEA- @_@ ow!

Garet-hey avari!

Mia-Update four kingdoms!

Garet-yeah!

Mia-(huggles garet)

Garet-(huggles back)

Max-(Twitching beside them)ow...

Random-err goodstory and if you can't tell from the love birds (jabs thumb towards Garet and Mia)

Garet and Mia-UPDATE FOUR KINGDOMS!

Random-they want you to update

Max

Steamshipper windshipper and apparent valeshipper

oO

Wow...that was really interesting. Giving us the Cannon's POV. I like it, a lot.

This is a really interesting and original story, and it was well written too.

Overall: Great story! Too bad it won't be continued...

-Joker

Interesting...

Ooh, wow! Great new story! I'm hooked so far! You're still an awesome writer, especially for your age! Congrats on another flawless fanficcie, hehe! :D Continue writing, please!