I really like it, good story ^^

Although I get where your coming from I must say that a sad ending would have been more effecting, the happy ending kinda didn't fit in with the rest. Good never the less. And I get have some tears at the funeral part.

~I've read the story. It's not finished yet. *blank stare* Yeah...so...*face contorts into evil demon* Hello. *anger* WHY IS IT NOT FINISHED? *normality* Chicken feet. I see slimy dead chicken feet. *pause* You said we need nothing good to say! Um...there were a few grammatical errors but whatever. Nothing to stress over. *sigh* Really wish it were finished cuz...I'm hungry. *munches on story* Need food. Help the starving reader. *holds up sign indicating empty tummy* Why have we no more story? Need more story... *leaves last num nums for author to continue story* You hate me. You won't finish it. Fine! I'll starve. *dies in misery*

~Aw, how touching. The emotions were evident here. Very good descriptions and their feelings were radiant. I can see Harry's certain love now. He was just new to the entire thing.

~Sorry that I must leave now. *runs away while thinking of story and still smiling on the inside* Thank you for writing. I shall finish reading.

~That was interesting. I thought he'd be the apothecary. I just didn't expect them to get to him right now. Aw, they'll die for each other. Why is Harry all doubtful? Isn't he so deeply, truly and madly in love with Draco? WHY THE HELL NOT? Draco is a Prince, perfect in every way. Harry is lucky to have him. Ungrateful bastard. *slaps Harry* *comforts Draco* Anywayz, they are running together but Draco gave up everything for him. He could at least be sure of his love. O, wonder what's next? *munch* *munch* You'll have no plot left. We're nearing the end. No idea how you'll pull it off with both of the dead.

~I review...see? Review... *shows shiny golden review* Yeah. Sparkles rock. *gasp* Twincest! That's always fun. Harry and Draco are off but to where? *gasp* They won't die, will they? Will they? TELL ME! I MUST KNOW! This is a very captivating story. Love the confused!Harry with his little sex questions. Aw...so innocent. Like me. *grins like demon* Mwahahahahahahaha!

~You know what's funny? I have been pondering this and can't believe I haven't mentioned it but...Draco is Juliette and Harry is Romeo, correct? Then why is it Juliette, the shy and pure one, is so forward and dominant and confident when Romeo is shy and innocent and oblivious? It should be the other way around...but you've changed it so it fits their characters. Brilliant. This is a brain teaser and I love it. Great job. Great story. *enjoys plot w/ apple sause and wine*

~Oh, why? You had to kill Ginny? Kill Ron, he's useless. The Hermione could have been with Ginny. Yeah! They seem opposite enough. Aw, you're mean. You big meanie...big meanie. Well, anywayz, it was wonderfully written. Properties to your mother for birthing you. *pause* Yes, I'm an idiot. Not the point. Point is...I am hungry... *munches more on plot* Oh, this is so the marriage proposal and sex part, I think. Oh, he has to be banished first. Yeah. Whatev. I read this when I was 11. Billy rocked back then before everyone overused and killed him. You've got a unique and refreshing elaboration on him. I think he was a homophobe and is turning over in his grave. *laughs insanely* Well, serves him right.

~You do love Billy Shaker. Cleverness I see in you. Must hurry. No time... See you on the other side and use the force. *whispers* "Beam me up, Scotty!" *beams up*

~Me likey. Me want more. Me review. See? That was cute. Harry and Draco are all "prefection in human flesh" and his Father just pulled him by the ear, that was adorable. Lucius is scary but it was also rather embarassing for Draco, being scolded in front of Harry. Oh, they need to meet tonight. Just hope Draco isn't beaten bloody... *shifty eyes* More story pwease? *munches on plot* So hungry...

~Lovely. *anticipation* Can't wait to see what your idea of romance is. Very nice thought processes. I got Remy and Siri back! I like the way we can see into Harry's mind and the way he thinks like a normal person. I also like the mystery surrounding the ever-beautiful Draco. Let's see where your genius takes us!

~Review is one word. Anywayz, yeah this rocks! I do wish they were wearing normal clothes though. Robes will always look weird to me. Anyhow, you're doing a spectacular job. Now, if only we could get them ALONE together...more than sparks may fly... And where are Siri and Remy? Where? Why? Who? What? When? How? *searches* Oh, there they are. *pulls out of closet* MINE! *drags Harry and Draco along too* Oh, dear, they're needed for the story? FINE! *heavy sigh* *gives back slashy hotties* They better be returned...

~Woah! No one cares about Harry not being in the premier chapter. Go Siri and Remy! Yeah! Hot monkey sex! WO! *makes other lewd comments* Yes, well, so far so good. Great actually. You have talent. Minimal errors, almost none. This will be a great story and...AU rocks! I love gold. I also love H/D slash. Yes, slashy goodnes!

read the story so far and i think that its fab so far and i must say that i hate 'romeo and juliet' but i like this, but it could just be the fact that it is written in english not shakespear, lol, hope you continue.

hi there! Nice idea the twist to Romeo and Juliet, really but...I don't man i as flame, plz i jst wanted to give u an advice. But first, let me tell you this. I think you write beautifully, its fluent and very picture-full(meaning it gives u the picture when ur reading, like a film and all..) But frew chapter's dialogs i'd suggest you to rewrite. Especially the one when Draco and Harry meet for the second time and the kiss for the first time. All goes too fast, and well, it doesnt really sound that well. I think u should cosinder it, you could really do a GREAT work out if! abayoo!