I SIMPLY LOVE IT. SOO SAD WHEN I SAW THE STORY END, BUT WELL IT WAS AWESOME!

Yay a new gang member ^^
Hehe Bentley's cute when he says that "Murray let me drive"!
I hope you update soon!

Heid

Nice job, keep up the god work.

YES! I was hoping you'd update this sooner or later :) It took a while for you to post a new chapter but it was more than worth the wait your skills haven't seemed to dull in the slightest. That was a great chapter and was very faithfull to the game yet it was flexible enough so that Douglas's presence in the jailbreak seemed like it was something straight out of the game. Great job as always and here's hoping you'll update sooner rather than later as I'm dying to see what the Klaww Gang and the Fiendish Five have in store for the team, later pal!

Wow you really captured the moment like right from the game! I've played it through so many times that I could easily see the road from the safehouse to Contessa's house so clearly! Awesome work! I can't wait till you update!

Heid

YAY! I was hoping you'd update soon :) Great chapterI like how you stayed faithfull to the game in terms of the actual heists but are giving the overall story a well needed overhaul, well done! I'm looking forward to the next few chapters I wonder which member of the Fiendish Five will pop up next? Maybe Raleigh could show up at the Contessa's mansion and use some kind of robot that harnesses bad mojo or something. Just a thought. Later pal!

Great story-telling, the swamp is my favourite world, that beast thing was particullarly descriptive. EXCELLENT work.

Excellent work, it fits perfectly as alternate sly 2, you've obviously worked very ** this. One typo I noticed:
I owe it to you, Sly, and Bentley.”

It's meant to be Sly and MURRAY. Good work anywayz.

Yikes! That was quite a plot twist having us find out that Clockwerk killed Douglas's parents. The battle between Mz. Ruby and Douglas was very cool. She was always an odd duck in the game. Freaky to be sure but honorable in her own wierd way too. So now Bentley and Douglas have to work side by side to free Sly and Murray from the Contessa eh? Sounds like the next few chapters should be quite entertaining. I kind of hope Neyla wont turn out to as much of a back-stabbing ** as she was in the game. She really seems to like Douglas and I think the guy could use a lady friend. but that's just me :) Hope you update soon, later!

Feels so funny because Sly did all that in Sly Raccoon. ^_^
was so funny 'cuz she said almost all the same things to Douglas that she said to Sly before. :DD
Cool that he made it.
I hope that you update soon, these three chapters wer all awesome!

Heid

Eep! I have a bad feeling about this! no!
Oh my god...
I'm glad there's that third chapter left for me to read. If I don't faint before I get my hands on it, of course..
*faints*

Ooh, a new twist!
Heh, that "Kevin Miller" thingy was kinda funny ^_^
Whoa you updated 3 chapters! wow! awesome!

Heid

Wow, this is a really good fanfiction. I'm a huge fan of Sly Cooper and this is even better than the video games! I love how well you've portrayed Clockwerk. He's got to be my all time favorite villain, he's always lurking in the shadows shceming and plotting and you never know if he's really gone or just biding his time for the chance to strike. I wonder if there will be two Clockwerks in the story? There are two sets of parts so wouldn't it make sense of the Klaww ganf would be able to build their own Clo-OH! I think I may know where this is going but just to be safe I'll keep my mouth shut. I really like Douglas he's quite an interesting character, when I first read this I was afraid he'd just be a Cooper clone with a coat of purple fur but he's a very original and entertaining OC, well done. I hope you update soon I'm dying to see what happens next. Later!

‘I’m surprised he can count to two.’ xD Lol.
hahahaahh Muggshot's WAY too funny xD
wow nice chapter, it's really been a while since you updated :/

Heid

Ah, classic Muggshot. Looks like things are going to be getting even more interesting from here on out.

I'm really glad that you've (finally) returned to continue your work. It really is one of my favorite stories. You've developed an extremely interesting character in Douglas, and I'm genuinely interested to find out what happens. Please don't disappoint by taking another million years to update. Please.

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