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TheTurkeyVulture
2007-11-19 . chapter 1
Amazing! No other word would suit this creation of yours! I just adore your discriptions of everything!
Angevar
2006-12-01 . chapter 1
ahh... mushmushmushmushmush... and rain and herbal tea! Who doesn't like rain and herbal tea?

One of my favorite side pairings personally. So much beating about the bush... I've never been able to even think about writing them because Rath is a complete enigma to me, the only times I ever really get him are when he's around our dear chatterbox. Which kind of makes writing him more than a little hard.

*cheers for Wil* Woohoo!! Go get 'em girlfriend! xD *is bricked*
Udyjay
2006-06-30 . chapter 1
I have nothing to say but "Aw..". I think I said that to all your fics that I have read. xD But still. It was so swet... curse you..
RandomTopic
2006-03-23 . chapter 1
This is good...I liked it.
Renn
2006-01-09 . chapter 1
Really Really *really* loved it. Seemed very In-character...
metal goat
2005-11-20 . chapter 1
Aw... that was so incredibly sweet. And it was a little sad at the beginning, but the ending was just so wonderful and perfect. This is a really lovely story, I can completley see everything happening. Great job.

~Citrus
SitDog-Boy
2005-07-21 . chapter 1
normally, i wouldn't like this pairing... but this was so cute! ^-^ i love it!
flamefirefox
2004-09-14 . chapter 1
hm.. X3 I liked the ending.. lmao.. XD .. but I really thought Wil would blab more O.o;; lol ^^ and Rath would talk with a lot of ... ...
(lj and gl= lunabo)
2004-08-27 . chapter 1
The way that you weave the words together creates a wonderful image of what is occurring. With little words, you are able to tell the story. Wonderful tale! I can't wait for your next story!
Amethyst Bubble
2004-08-25 . chapter 1
Aw...cute. And an answer to the question I know we've all thought about: "What the hell happens to all the relationships when everyone splits up to go back to their homelands?!"...Eh, not sure if that came out how I wanted it to, but you get the point, don't you? Anyway, very, very nice. I quite like this. It's cute. And Rath had better not leave Wil again. Or he'll have to pay for making our beloved Normal Archer Number Three sad. See? See?! This review is the reason why I should be kept away from chocolate! It's all over the place and completely random!*Sigh* Ah, well...as long as the message gets out that I really did enjoy the fic, it's fine, I suppose. ^^;; So glad to see another wonderful piece from you.

~*~Ammy
RianneHime
2004-08-25 . chapter 1
It's FLUFF! It's genuine FLUFF! Yay! ^_^ I envy your ability to stay in character. Meep.

You know, I haven't really seen you around here lately . . . glad you posted this!
Beagle
2004-08-24 . chapter 1
This was really good, and it was written very discriptively. I enjoyed it a lot.
R Amythest
2004-08-24 . chapter 1
Ohh, Melfice, is it just me, or are your one-shots getting even BETTER?! *grins happily*

Yep, slightly more realistic this time, and not another Rath/Wil deathfic, and that makes it more original. Actually, it IS more original, because there are some themes and events that haven't been exploited before.

I have a suggestion, though. It's nice and all, and it is a rather romantic style, but you could cut down on the parts where just colors are used to describe eyes. It's nice the first few times, but after that, it quickly dullens and becomes rather boring-ish.

I like this. ^^ I'll go check two of those pretty boxes now.,..
dlkfjkhggkgh
2004-08-24 . chapter 1
OMFGHOTT.
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