 TheTurkeyVulture 2007-11-19 . chapter 1Amazing! No other word would suit this creation of yours! I just adore your discriptions of everything! |
 Angevar 2006-12-01 . chapter 1ahh... mushmushmushmushmush... and rain and herbal tea! Who doesn't like rain and herbal tea?
One of my favorite side pairings personally. So much beating about the bush... I've never been able to even think about writing them because Rath is a complete enigma to me, the only times I ever really get him are when he's around our dear chatterbox. Which kind of makes writing him more than a little hard.
*cheers for Wil* Woohoo!! Go get 'em girlfriend! xD *is bricked* |
 Udyjay 2006-06-30 . chapter 1I have nothing to say but "Aw..". I think I said that to all your fics that I have read. xD But still. It was so swet... curse you.. |
 RandomTopic 2006-03-23 . chapter 1This is good...I liked it. |
 Renn 2006-01-09 . chapter 1Really Really *really* loved it. Seemed very In-character... |
 metal goat 2005-11-20 . chapter 1Aw... that was so incredibly sweet. And it was a little sad at the beginning, but the ending was just so wonderful and perfect. This is a really lovely story, I can completley see everything happening. Great job.
~Citrus |
 SitDog-Boy 2005-07-21 . chapter 1normally, i wouldn't like this pairing... but this was so cute! ^-^ i love it! |
 flamefirefox 2004-09-14 . chapter 1 hm.. X3 I liked the ending.. lmao.. XD .. but I really thought Wil would blab more O.o;; lol ^^ and Rath would talk with a lot of ... ... |
 (lj and gl= lunabo) 2004-08-27 . chapter 1 The way that you weave the words together creates a wonderful image of what is occurring. With little words, you are able to tell the story. Wonderful tale! I can't wait for your next story! |
 Amethyst Bubble 2004-08-25 . chapter 1Aw...cute. And an answer to the question I know we've all thought about: "What the hell happens to all the relationships when everyone splits up to go back to their homelands?!"...Eh, not sure if that came out how I wanted it to, but you get the point, don't you? Anyway, very, very nice. I quite like this. It's cute. And Rath had better not leave Wil again. Or he'll have to pay for making our beloved Normal Archer Number Three sad. See? See?! This review is the reason why I should be kept away from chocolate! It's all over the place and completely random!*Sigh* Ah, well...as long as the message gets out that I really did enjoy the fic, it's fine, I suppose. ^^;; So glad to see another wonderful piece from you.
~*~Ammy |
 RianneHime 2004-08-25 . chapter 1It's FLUFF! It's genuine FLUFF! Yay! ^_^ I envy your ability to stay in character. Meep.
You know, I haven't really seen you around here lately . . . glad you posted this! |
 Beagle 2004-08-24 . chapter 1 This was really good, and it was written very discriptively. I enjoyed it a lot. |
 R Amythest 2004-08-24 . chapter 1Ohh, Melfice, is it just me, or are your one-shots getting even BETTER?! *grins happily*
Yep, slightly more realistic this time, and not another Rath/Wil deathfic, and that makes it more original. Actually, it IS more original, because there are some themes and events that haven't been exploited before.
I have a suggestion, though. It's nice and all, and it is a rather romantic style, but you could cut down on the parts where just colors are used to describe eyes. It's nice the first few times, but after that, it quickly dullens and becomes rather boring-ish.
I like this. ^^ I'll go check two of those pretty boxes now.,.. |
 dlkfjkhggkgh 2004-08-24 . chapter 1 OMFGHOTT. |