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| Carolyn 2008-07-19 ch 18, anon. | abuseI love this story. You are a great writer. I don't think Teri told Jack about her getting raped by Ira Gaines though. Maybe you could have her tell him in the next story or Kim tell him. That's all I have to say. |
| Andrèse 2005-05-01 ch 18, anon. | abuseIt was good! Well written and such. not too many spelling mistakes LOL but I think there's more to Kim than you say... you make her out to be too dumb ya know? But I did enjoy very much. Looking forward to reading the rest of your stuff! |
| lynw21 2004-10-19 ch 17,  | abuseGood so far, wher are we heading from here? A new start for Jack and Terri. |
| janedoe85 2004-10-15 ch 17, | abuseThat was *sniff* beautiful... |
| Daria 2004-10-13 ch 17, anon. | abuseIt's so good and relieving to see Jack and Teri happy in another reality.Thanks. Can we have some tender love of Teri for Jack?Pretty please.:) |
| B523 2004-10-12 ch 17, anon. | abuseHow nice. Love it! Just one question: What happened to Nina? Is she happy with Tony? Hope so... |
| signsfan 2004-10-01 ch 16, anon. | abuseI can't believe I didn't find this sooner I've been waiting for someone to do a story where Teri lives.This is really good.I really wanna know what happens next.Update soon please. |
| janedoe85 2004-09-17 ch 14, | abuseOh, poor Jack... I wish I could console him... hm... Poor, Teri, too. I hope she'll tell him the truth. |
| janedoe85 2004-09-10 ch 10, | abuseVery good so far... and I have a feeling things will get very interesting very soon... |
| lynw21 2004-09-10 ch 10, | abuseI have been reading all along, well written. I waiting to see what happens when he returns to CTU. Of course with this chapter we have to first know what happens when Jack tells Terri about his fling with Nina. |
| ashhead 2004-09-06 ch 7, | abuseI'm reading it- i really like it (which is pretty big because its a jack story and i'm not a jack fan) |
| janedoe85 2004-09-05 ch 7, | abuseGreat job!! This is really great so far... one question, though... is Teri pregnant? And does she know? Oops... that was two questions... hehe |
| ok fine forget about me i d... 2004-09-04 ch 7, anon. | abuseNo i'm not reading it at all. Just looking through it thinking JACK JACK JACK Oh look there is Jack. But I'm not reading. Great job so far. |
| Jack-rocks 2004-09-03 ch 6, | abuseGosh... how could I forget to leave a feedback on this? This is one of the BEST stories you have written so far... so emotional, so sad and so well written.. PLEASE, KEEP GOING! This story is BRILLIANT!! :) |
| Bluenose 2004-08-25 ch 2, | abuseI thought Terri's coldness was to do with Jacks fling with Nina, then remembered that she didnt know about that yet! Did that still happen BTW? Good chapter, looking forward to more. |