wow.
but there's still this feeling nagging me that it should've been ryou...the personality matches better...

**, this is completely AMAZING. I've read it over so many times before and thought I've reviewed, apparently not. I just mentioned this to a friend, found the URL and gave it to her and couldn't help but to reread it myself. I cry every time I read this. You make me cry with HAPPINESS. I don't think any other fic has accomplished that. I am incredibly happy for these fictional purposely OOC anime characters and I'm crying for them, for once there's a story where the pair deserves it. YOU ARE AMAZING. I WILL WORSHIP YOU.

*sob*

Awesome job!

Hah! That was good. awesome!

lol Nice ending

lol Wow that was a lot of excitement! I love it

I love the way you had the feelings and atmospheres change smoothly, but swiftly! I love this story dude

Wow. This Bakura is completely different! Awesome change in attitude

Ahaha Bartenders outfit. Hilarious!

Wow. Isis yelling. Not expected at all. But perfect for the scene. Man, I love this story :)

Very descriptive, and you can feel what the characters are feeling. The longer the better! And I think this is one of your better chapters

There's a twist! I'm already reading the next chapter

I like the way you keep having Marik fight with himself ^_^ Mental fights are so fun to right aren't they?

These chapters are really descriptive, and you can actually feel the emotions. I can't think of any other word than awesome
(and amazing, super, keep it up)

Wow! You are an awesome writer dude..or dudet lol