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Promises Are Broken Easily
2009-11-11 . chapter 19
hi, i know i reviewed once before. but i can't help but reread this again, and since some reject code 3 stuffy says i can't review a chappie i reviewed already, i decided to go back one.
The love, all of it, the pure EMOTIONS, they hit me every single F*ING time. and diseased means you're sick. The word you're looking for is "deceased", which means dead.
and especially the unexpected humor all the time.
can't wait to read the "spectrum siren" story!
Promises Are Broken Easily
2009-08-11 . chapter 20
wow.
but there's still this feeling nagging me that it should've been ryou...the personality matches better...
yeyavailability
2008-09-07 . chapter 20
**, this is completely AMAZING. I've read it over so many times before and thought I've reviewed, apparently not. I just mentioned this to a friend, found the URL and gave it to her and couldn't help but to reread it myself. I cry every time I read this. You make me cry with HAPPINESS. I don't think any other fic has accomplished that. I am incredibly happy for these fictional purposely OOC anime characters and I'm crying for them, for once there's a story where the pair deserves it. YOU ARE AMAZING. I WILL WORSHIP YOU.

*sob*
Florence14
2008-06-06 . chapter 20
Awesome job!
Florence14
2008-05-28 . chapter 14
Hah! That was good. awesome!
Florence14
2008-05-28 . chapter 13
lol Nice ending
Florence14
2008-05-27 . chapter 12
lol Wow that was a lot of excitement! I love it
Florence14
2008-05-27 . chapter 11
I love the way you had the feelings and atmospheres change smoothly, but swiftly! I love this story dude
Florence14
2008-05-25 . chapter 10
Wow. This Bakura is completely different! Awesome change in attitude
Florence14
2008-05-25 . chapter 9
Ahaha Bartenders outfit. Hilarious!
Florence14
2008-05-25 . chapter 8
Wow. Isis yelling. Not expected at all. But perfect for the scene. Man, I love this story :)
Florence14
2008-05-25 . chapter 7
Very descriptive, and you can feel what the characters are feeling. The longer the better! And I think this is one of your better chapters
Florence14
2008-05-25 . chapter 6
There's a twist! I'm already reading the next chapter
Florence14
2008-05-25 . chapter 5
I like the way you keep having Marik fight with himself ^_^ Mental fights are so fun to right aren't they?
Florence14
2008-05-25 . chapter 4
These chapters are really descriptive, and you can actually feel the emotions. I can't think of any other word than awesome
(and amazing, super, keep it up)
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