My,my,my, I think Dax my be in for some trouble with the itty bit. This thing already looks promising, but I have to get to bed. I'll read more tomarrow. _

BTW, I'm Lorana, the girl on the Pen sight that requested the URL to this fic. Glad I asked for it too.

Loor

oh such a great, great story! Daxter was so wonderfully in character! loved it! *adds to fave-list* _

Wow! Roxie puts my oc to shame, and you even fit one of my favorite parts of JakII into it. It's sorta scary, those six words are some of my favorites in the game. And before you ask, yes, I'm the idiot who keeps rambling on about Dark eco crystals and the Teen Titans.

P.S. Can't wait for the sequel or an update for From Jump to Haven!

Great ending:D Hurry up with the sequel

YAY! GREAT FIC! Loved it! I'll watch out for the sequel! But Naughty Dog kinda already made that with JakII, lol! Heh. I hope your sequel has more of Roxie! AND BO! ESPECIALLY BO! BO! BO! BO!

Amber

O get the sequel up ASAP! PLease I so want ot see how Jak fits in with Roxie and the gang! So Update ASAP, PLEASE! ::puppy dog eyes:: Thanks!

HOORAY! GREAT ENDING!

I loved the way you ended this story-I can't think of a better ending! This was a great fanfic. It's a powerful adventure, and I was constantly 'hanging in suspense' for the next chapter! Great job!

Theres only one other thing that I would like to see you do more of in the future: I'd like to see some more effective cliff hangers. You've had some good ones here and there throughout this story, but it would be nice to see some more powerful loose ends that finish off chapters. Start problems at the ends of chapters and resolve them in the beginnings-That's the best way to keep an audience hooked.

Again, great storyline. I loved your character development, and the way that you set the mood towards the end of the fanfic. Great descriptive words. Powerful emotions.

Way to go! I can't wait for the sequel!

authraw

wow! this was a really really great story! :nodnod: lets see how well it'll hold up to the Daxter game that's coming out. form what i've seen, it looks like it'll actually work out in some areas! _ well, can't wait for the sequel!

That was a wonerful ending to this story...LOVED IT! Is Bo, Roxie, Merlander and my fav...Flash, gonna be rejoining with Daxter in the sequel? I sure hope so...I really liked this story...It's one of my favorites..._...I can't wait for the sequel!

UPDATE SOON!

GMB

This was great, especally the last part! I'm dying for more, so I can't wait for the sequel! Great work mate! Keep it up! _*

Izzy

*claps* Wonderful ending, Pix! :D You really are a talented author, and this was an excellent fic. I happily await the sequel.

I loved the story...It kept me interested and it had me guessing what was gonna happen next..I believe the seuqel should be a new story...Update Soon!..

GMB

P.S. Make the last chapter much, much longer..._

Awsome chapter! For the sequel I would say put it up as a new fic and in the summary say it is the sequel to this one...thats usually how it is done! LOL! Anyway update soon!

This was an EXCELLENT chapter! Very descriptive, very powerful. Full of emotions. Great job! I can't wait for the exciting conclusion and the sequel!

I would make the sequel a new fanfic, personally. It would be nice to start the chapter numbers over at 1. :D

Well, I've got to get back to my homework.

Eef! don't let mer kill roxie! that would be bad! T_T and also, can someone please kick simon's ass?