no... :(

ok, well first off, this story was amazing! i really love how you described everyone's feelings. was close to tears at some points. and the idea behind excaliber being the reason for evil makes so much sense! i like the fight scene where chris remembers the past and the fact that he really is depressed after killing wy. i mean, after everything he's been through how could he not be?

But... how could piper and leo be so oblivious! i could understand them wanting to give chris the sword still... i'm w/ them on that. but hiding it in the manor?? and the epiloge :( :( :( that's where the "no" came from earlier.. lol. i'm so sad. this means the future hasn't changed, doesn't it? leo's still not around and wy is enthralled by the sword. poor chris will grow up in pain again! :(

anyway, good story tho!! despite the epilogue it's still not unrealistic and i can see it happening. i loved it! just sad.

Good fic

A few stories have used that concept but your is so thought out that it seems true!

oh my gosh...ending = epic for this chapter!

wow! This truely was an amazing story. I love the twist with sword turning Wyatt Evil. I wish that the epilogue was more reassuring though. I want my Chris to be happy! But i still love how you captured all the emotions. it was awesome

WOW...im speechless. This whole story makes more sense than the actual events in the show. Words cannot express my love for your writing. If it weren't for the fact that I now love this story with all my heart, i would totally sue for the whiplash this chapter gave me =] keep up the good work

Well, I though you deserve antoher rewieu because of all this awesomeness ^-^I was so surprise about Excalibur. BUt in a way, it made sense. I would have love to see Charmed with Chris now as the main character ^-^ Too bad they didn't do it. Oh and I prefer your Leslie...And Darryl..And Duncan...Zach...And evryone else. I loved them so much.

And I wept so hard XD For each one of their death. And for Chris misery. God,aren't we a little masochistic with him XD I lvoe it how Chris try to pull a brave face. And how he is in fact terrifed...Not a Gary Stu.And I was as afraid as him...Especially when he prayed or ask for God's help ^_^

The thing with Zankou too was complelty unexpected.

Great work! You own a french fan ^-^J'adore XD

the line with piper offering to cook chris his favorite dinner was the most heart-stopping line - it really embodied how much the mother wanted to keep her son...and i LOVE the last line..XD with everyone flying into their respective portals.

lol.

I read this whole story and I thought it was really well done. The explanation you gave for Wyatt turning evil makes a lot of sense, more than the one they used on the show I think and the development of Chris's character was done beautifully. So overall, very good, I will be reading the sequel shortly, thanks for a good read!

okay it's me again the girl who asked you for the original version of redundant, okay my email address is
thanks a bunch i'm really looking forward to reading it. yay

great!

It's turning Wy anyways! Come on! That is just NOT fair! I love this story though! Its just so awesome. Well written, awesome plot, good progression, caught my attention so fast... I LOVE it.

Awesome, I really loved it.

I love this, the plot, the angst and of curse Chris, you are very good with words, it feels so real and the epilogue is so great because is everything all over again, the same pain and the same sacrifice .. and it awesome, good job!:

There're a handful people who used 'Charmed's fact and rarer still to find someone who could eloquently put the pieces and create an enchanting fic. You fall at the latter.
Congratulations.