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| Broken Sword of the Morning 2008-01-19 ch 4, | abuseA great beginning for what has the potential to become an excellent story. Your style is good, and it flows well - you don't put in too much detail, but then you don't leave it out completely. Well done. There's one thing that slightly bothers me, though: Beastboy told Terra that Slade was a "Bad guy. Way bad." If Terra does miss Beastboy, and still thinks of him as a friend, I believe she'd remember what he said. |
| Peace Like a River 2008-01-17 ch 6, | abuseYou know, I've never liked Terra much, but after reading this, I really feel for her now. Poor kid. :-( |
| Jewel-Gurl73 2005-12-06 ch 6, | abuseTerra should've known better then to agree to work for Slade, but it's understandable why she did; who wants to be alone their whole life? awesome fic, please keep writing! |
| Domenic 2005-02-19 ch 1, | abuseYes, a Slade story! And Terra just makes it sweeter. Going on favorites. |
| Hodj'n'Podj 2004-12-24 ch 1, | abuse"Don't make me hurt you." "Don't make me laugh." Oh my sounds so very familiar doesn't it?...awesome. |
| TerrasTerrian 2004-12-21 ch 6, | abuseok i had just finished. It was short but i liked it. Its was a behind the scenes fanfic. Some times I wish they would make an episode were they free terra from her stone encasment but the cartoon ended well it would be wierd to have another titan they would have to redue the whole theme song in the begining of the show. Terra is one of my fav characters because shes not perfect and she has a lot of stress like me. When i watch the show it makes me sad to see Terra episodes because i know what looks ahead. Well done other words! |
| TerrasTerrian 2004-12-21 ch 1, | abuseVery good I will read more soon. Love your stories! |
| Silver Tigress 07 2004-12-06 ch 1, | abuseYah! Sladey! Go Slade, go Slade, go Slade! Everyone else: -.-' Go Terra, Go Terra, Go Terra! Everyone else: SHUT UP ALREADY! :P I cant help it! I am very hyper right now and this story rocks! Plz update soon! |
| Shiankra 2004-10-25 ch 6, | abuseAwesome, i'm so glad someone likes Terra enough to write this! I'm writing something similar, actally, it'll be fun to see how different our takes on teh training turn out. I wish there was more, you should think about doing the AU version as well. Or maybe you ave already and I haven't checked yet. |
| ssjEasterBunny 2004-10-08 ch 6, | abuseah... its late and i'm tired, but i refuse to read a story and then not review it; its just wrong. the chaptes were short, but thats ok since i was tired anyway. it was kinda like a one-shot/chapter-fic fusion. i like that u didnt add in any new characters; i hate when ppl do that. 99% of the time, I can't stand original characters. You can't name 'em. I also hate the name Wintergreen, but u had no control over that. good insight on how terra was tricked and forced to betray the titans; when ur fave character leaves, pulls a 180, and comes back still spinning, a slight desire for an explanantion develops, eh? thanks for that. TERRA FOREVER! HAHA! --Dave |
| Infamous One 2004-09-15 ch 6, | abuseThat was a great ending,to stop the story right where the toon starts.Bravo,Bravo! As for who found who,I think Slade had obviously been watching Terra for a while(the "I saw her first"line) and in turn she went looking for him afterwards to help control her powers.Doesn't he say something like he'll know if she wants him or he'll be watching? Anyway,your story is done very well and everybody stays remarkably in character(always a toughie for most folks). |
| Scorpio Serpent 2004-09-11 ch 6, | abuseThat's the end?!?!?! I REALLY wished you went into the Betrayal/Aftershock episodes. Maybe you could write a sequel? |
| Miss. Phlish 2004-09-11 ch 6, | abuseThe end? THE END?!! It's over?! Erm...anyways, good job. ^^ |
| Johnny A. O 2004-09-11 ch 5, | abuseGreat update! |
| jejuneepitaph 2004-09-10 ch 5, | abuseYou updated! Yes!yes! booya! I mean *cough* excellent story, well written update ASAP! |