it was a nice read, i must say. it was refreshing to get a kind of side story like this or something like that for mars :] however.! i wanted more :/ it cut me short at the end. but,like you said, "kira just asked a question and rei gives an unusual answer" so, all in all it was great.

This was a pretty good one shot, the way Rei reacted to Kira was genuine and the characters are reallistic. Great job!

This story was not that great. I do not think it deserve that many good reviews.

cute! very cute.

So cute! I just wish that there would have been more to it. Like, how she dealt with the child through the years and stuff like that. But other than that it was very good! ^_^

Aww that was cute ^^ i loved it keep up the great work

AH! IT'S SO CUTE!!
Adorable in every way imaginable.

Hmm...eleven months after that discussion, Kira would probably be around ten months pregnant. That baby started talkin' early! ^_^ Cute, though. Might want to change it to like a year later that the baby started talking.

aww! I loved it although it's such a short one-shot.

I think Reiko is a clever name : D

I loved it! This is going in my favorites.

is he dead? is he alive? you make it so detailed that there is no clu... pls let im be alive! pls!

I thought it was creative

It was...okay. I didn't love it but then again I didn't hate it either, get what im saying?

This is a lovely story, it truly is. As I read it, my mind saw it in a manga form, not the usual movie that it shows me, which was very entertaining. You depicted Rei's personality perfectly, swearing and all. Very, very good... with a few glitches. I'm just wondering, is this it?! The way you ended the story was so sudden, so uh, like a car screeching to a sudden, unexpected halt that it was almost bad(This is not a flame, just my opinion. PLEASE don't hate me!). It made me think and feel that there was going to be a second chapter, but there wasn't, which disappointed me at first. But now, of course, I realize that this makes a perfectly cute short story. But anyway, I feel that if you wish to make the ending of your story less (for lack of a better word to describe that car-stopping feeling)sudden, you should include what happens(even a little) between the time that Rei agrees to have a child and the time that little Reiko says her first word. I think that something like that might help to improve the way you ended your great story.

YAY! I like this one-shot! Keep writing! Very good! ... okay, all that aside, WRITE MORE STUFF! And I'll open fire on anyone syupid enough to flame you. That was very well done, and totally like Rei to fall off the bed and totally NOT understand what Kira's trying to say. Excellent work!

hi!!wow, nice one!!such a cute ending n Rei is so stupid!

keep up the awesome work!