You ended it so masterfully. I can't wait for the next installment. Probably not the most accurate song, but I could hear Animal I Have Become playing in my head when Dizzy was on a rampage.

On a more professional note, You still have a couple of problems with grammar, but it's nothing major, so Kudos for that. Well, hope to hear the next part soon!

Sincerely,
Joshua Strife,
Da Dark Daimond Dude.

As a KyxDizzy fan: Thank you very much for writing such a wonderful fic. The best in character development in the Guilty Gear section so far. If possible, I really hope to see how this story ends :)

Awsome,I think this was really well written, and I look foward to more.

I've been reading this story and so far its been gripping and enjoyable. But I don't think you should have changed Robo-Ky's way of speaking, its always been capitals and underscores in the game diologue.
Also, have you read a fiction named Cumilation 13? The plot of this chapter almost seems the same but it has Dizzy in it instead of Testament.
Anyways keep up the good work.

Aw, that was so sweet at the end...

Wait, FIRST arc?! ONLY?! Whoa...

( o.O)

Impressive piece of work! This is one of my personal favorites. Alot of cool stuff in this one. I enjoyed Ky as a character in this story as well as many of Dizzy's 'developments'. Keep the good work up.

Huzzah, an update!
Glad to see that Ky and Dizzy are finally bridging the gap that's between them...or starting to. I'm interested as to what the PWAB has on their sleeves, and what role Testament will play.

as always, look forward to the next chapter!

I liked how you managed to save the heroine and ty the hero to her in a way that he could see himself in her, not something anyone usually looks for.

Now that Ky has a tie to her that is more than being in his presence by the promise of Sol, how will their relationship continue to develop?

your story is really adicting
and besides since ky and dizzy are my favorites characters so that means i will keep reading your story
good work!

Yay! New chapter! New chapter! And after such a long wait, too! Meow! Now, Dizzy had her fangs into Ky's arm. Who else, I wonder, will want his head when they find out he has a Gear under his protection?

The PWAB is going to act sooner or latter, and we're going to end up with a meow-ed city district in the process. One angry Gear Commander and one furious Holy Knight Lord means devastation all around.

Hooray for exposition. :)

This story is really getting juicy. I look forward to the next bit.

Just when I thought Guilty Gear died this little chapter popped up in my inbox. It was by far my favourite chapter, the most exhilirating, the most exciting, the most gripping...totally breath taking. After minimal action, this chapter comes up and knocks you out! After that punch, you gotta be in a coma, or at least have a concussion! That must have been the plot twist of the century and the brilliant thing is how everything has been so nicely sewn together. Amazing work...I'm really speechless and in a state of shock...

Hooray, another update! Just the one I was waiting for! Great job again, and I can sense the developing "plot point".

keep writing!

Yay! New chapter after so long! And I-no is scared? Boy, that's a first. I look forward to seeing where this will go. With Dizzy in Justice form, it's gonna be...ugly. Bring up the next chapter, TWH...I (we) can't wait.