AW! That was cute! I have to amitt, it WAS a bit confusing, but...thats what makes it original! I agree with B, this calls for a sequel! -puppy eyes- Pretty please with brownes on top? Ja ne!

aaw so cute!

It wasn't entirely confusing. I kinda got it...okay...it was. But it was still good! Hooray for being completely and utterly befuddled! I liked the way you ended it. By the end, I couldn't really tell if he was dreaming or not. Good job!

If it's a little confusing than it's orginal haha. That's cool I liked it also what you said at the end. Anyways, I really enjoyed it was interesting and well done, how it started than the small transition to time, without saying it. That was different and good change.

confusing though cute...)

i really like it..but really gaara and naruto faked a battle?and fled to another country..

hmm thats new D

anyways your story is really good..

. That was nice(jejeje)

Kyaa! *clings and spews nonsense about awesomeness*

Really.. all I have to say is... Kyaa! _

I liked the story. It was pretty well written, a few things like grammar could probably use some work, but other then that it's great.

I liked it It was cute and very eat-o to read. Keep up the good work!

We need more gaaranaru fics here! And yours is pretty cute, and no, I don't find it confusing

o... O_o that was nice

Well, that wasn't really very confusing, but a great one-shot.

thats cute! i love it, your good. plz make many more naruto stories -

I think it calls for a sequel. ;) *wink wink nudge nudge*