*snort* Not sure which would be worse, the horse or the kid. Although admittedly the kid is a little easier to explain ... Talented. Nice blackmail. I can actually see them doing that, too.
Personally, I prefer Shoryuu. The Sy- looks really weird to me. Whatever rings with your head.
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hmm I prefer Shoryuu o.o coz that's the name I saw on my subtitles ^^" watching 45 episodes of that name tends to do that to people, y'know? =P
great fic though o.o pity there wasn't slash but I suppose you have to cater to more people than just me (pouts)
write more, k? you have a great command of the language and of scenes--don't let it go to waste!

awaiting the next piece of work

you are such a Pervert!

That was nice! I haven't laughed that hard in a while. Served Shouryuu right (that's how I prefer it). Gr. *eye twitch* Anyway, good job. Very convicing.

Great story! Are you going to make this story into a one-short fic or a continuous one? Thanks for the translation website too!

Yep, in character. Shoryu's always running off to goodness knows where & neglecting his royal duties & Enki's always having to get him back. The prank is something Enki will defintely pull.

I liked it and I thought it was in character. I thought it was interesting that Enki would transform while sleeping, I'd never thought of that before. Oh, and I think I prefer the spelling "Shouryuu".

omg that was funny i cant stop laughing " Mr. Houkan had been Found in Bed with a Horse" hehehehe! love it

That was very nicely written! I like your phrasing, and it was highly amusing to boot! I

Your sense of humour seriously differs from mine :p but I like it anyway ^_^
The twists really caught me off guard, thrice, actually.
If only you could write faster...

What a way to be introduced to the Twelve Kingdoms fan section. Great short fic; Shoryuu and Enki are such vivid characters I’ve been hoping to see them in something more compromising for a while now. The fic was cute well written and a great read. You’re characterization seems spot on. Enki’s pranks was absolutely without question his style, and I can really see Shoryuu being a bit of a player. No one like him could live would out some sort of dark vice. Tai-ish twins. Loved it! Fight the overly skinny ideal! Thanks for the read and I look forward to reading more of your stuff.

Hot damn this is good. Seriously I love your stories. If only you could write faster. Although I'm not really one to preach about that.

Anyways on with the review. I love Enki here you showcased his relationship ith his emporer very well. Everyone seemed in character as well especially the three advisors and Shouryuu (I prefer this spellnig of his name).

Anyway, write more and faster and for the love of some random deity finish your Taiki in jail story (sorry can't remember the title right now).