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Caethilia Mordon
2006-01-14 . chapter 4
More with the weird symbols! Hey, if you want a beta still, I'm free-
Caethilia Mordon
2006-01-14 . chapter 3
It... it... there's something terribly wrong with your formatting, honey. I just don't understand.
Caethilia Mordon
2006-01-14 . chapter 2
Very good idea, this teaching-from-afar thing Wendell has going on. Inspired, really.
Caethilia Mordon
2006-01-14 . chapter 1
I like it already, and as I am in a happy mood, I will now go forth to read and review all th following chapters in this story. Yes, all four of them! And I promise not to beg for more chapters until the end :P
Samus
2005-11-10 . chapter 4
I just notice you updated...five months ago. Sorry! No, evidently I didn't get those chapters. My e-mail junk filter was set to the highest level, so perhaps I didn't recognize it in my scanning. I got a new e-mail, though, so you might try again if you continue this fic. I am still willing to help. Hopefully I'd get it next time.
Spider from Mars
2005-07-01 . chapter 4
*squees for 20 minutes* Finally! I loved OFUM, and I read a HP OFU, but this is... yeah. I can't believe someone did a 10th Kingdom one! This is awesome! Yes I'm done now.
LittleGinny15
2005-06-19 . chapter 4
1: Nope not a suggestion. I was just merely getting out my frustration - unfortunately i shouldn't have put it in a review.

2: It's LittleGinny15, not Little Ginny 12 but that's ok im just very picky.

3: Who's Elizabeth Bradley? Is it me or someone else? coz I applied with a close name: Elizabeth Greyfale.
A Fan
2005-05-26 . chapter 4
everything is good except could you please get rid of all the `o things, I'm so confused. Thanks.
Someone
2005-05-24 . chapter 4
Well, one thing you should teach is how to format stories properly on , so there are no Ó and other foreign characters throughout the story.

Those types of things tend to make a story difficult to read, wherever you are posting it. Remember has a preview feature, use it wisely!

;-)
Andy Longwood
2005-05-24 . chapter 4
The breakfast bit is classic. I love it.

*enrolls*
LunaSoleil07
2005-05-18 . chapter 1
I would like to enroll. See application below.

Name: Rayan yos'Galan
Race: Human
Gender: Female
Age: 15
Characters You're Especially Fond Of: King Wendell, Dog Prince, Wolf, Virginia
Description: Dark brown hair, black eyes, golden brown skin
Favorite Character: Dog Prince/Prince Wendell
Lust object: None
Least Favorite Character: None
I have: seen the miniseries AND read the book
How many times?: Six or more
I am: Very Familiar with Canon
Ever written an Original character?: No
A Mary-Sue/ Gary-Stu?: No
Slash?: No
Favored Relationships: Wolf/Virginia, King Wendell/Bride (don't care, as long as it works)
I fear (mark all that apply): nothing in all ten kingdoms
Signature: Rayan yos'Galan, Thodelm Korval

Thank you for your consideration.

Blessed be,
Luna
LittleGinny15
2005-03-24 . chapter 2
AH! KILL THE QUEEN! KILL THE QUEEN!
*makes a contract and has all teachers sign it but they cant read it:*

CONTRACT FOR THE STUDENTS:
Every form (the forms the students have filled out, naturally) that is ripped by a student purposfully because of unfair injury or damage to the child, or any complaints (that are made fairly) made by the child, it shall deduct £50 from the teacher causing the trouble's wages.
The meaning of "fairly" will be:
* Unfair punishment (they trip and damage something accidently, they are made to pay for it)
* Troublesome pupils causing the child to get in trouble (A pupil harms someone/damages property/disrupts a lesson, blames it on another student. That other student is punished)
* Unfair extra work (Extra work is handed over for no particular reason)
Etc. Also, if the child rips the form, teachers will be treated in the same way for the same amount of time.

Signed, _
Silverone3
2005-01-25 . chapter 2
I like this seems good so far please ipdate so i can read more
Silverone3
2005-01-25 . chapter 1
Name: Rakuel Star
Race: Half Elven Half Human
Gender: Female
Age: 14
CYEFO:Wolfe,Wendal
Description: brown hair, silver eyes, 6' 1 thin
Favorite Character: Wolf
Lust Object: Wolf
Leat Fave. Character: Tony
I have:both
Three times
Very Familiar with Canon
No
No
Yes
Wolf/Virginia
Mortal ingury
Buritsutsunei
2004-12-23 . chapter 2
yay! finally another chapter! I take it i'll be in the next one, eh?
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