 Erroneously 2009-07-03 . chapter 1I feel like this is a take on the good Samaritan, but turned sideways and squished into modern times. I really like your version of how God is looking out for us. |
 zowiemagic 2006-05-04 . chapter 1Other than the fact that you really ought to consider dividing it into paragraphs, all I can say is BRILLIANT! This is the first story I'm putting on my favorites list. May The Lord bless your future stories as He's blessed this one... :) |
 Kiumu_Ro-Ku-Bee (don't wanna' log in) 2004-09-12 . chapter 1 Oh, comon...continue it! It's funny, and cute...I like it...continue! Who's boss? (I know it's probably one of two...well, beings, but which one?)
Continue! Arigatou! |
 Me 2004-09-01 . chapter 1 Aww . . . I really liked this one shot! It's humorous, yet true and filled with a moral, too. ^^ Thanks for sharing it! |
 spunkiegirl 2004-08-28 . chapter 1Excellent! |