OMG! Finally!E(By The way, if my commen+s come ou+ weird, It's because I'm on my new DSi,and i+s nard +o write wi+h)

im so...confused. as well as a little disappointed. I was really hoping there would have been more depth involved...like...how did the daughter come along if yuki still turned into the rat so easily...and akito? What happened to him? There was very little mention of momiji so it felt very off for me. And, how did Tohru find out she was pregnant...with little to no information except the kiss (which i must say was VERY well written :D ) But yes, i feel like i was left to wonder what happened in the little bit you wrote. So now im sad :( but the whole general idea of this was great!

so i finished the second chapter, and i must say, im quite curious now :D Im going to hurry and finishe this so i can get to the next chapter.
To get to the point, I really like how this is going :D
what a great idea!

wow, this was great! (:
you really captured the character! :D

-MoriKyoyalover101

um. the last chap was ok... but.. i kinda liked the others better... sorry! i know that I'm just a newb who had absolutely no right to say that, but if i didn't, then it would have gnawed at me until i was just a shell of my former self! well, keep up the great work!

i actually HATE kyo, but t the end, i actually felt genuinely sympathetically... sad for him! wow! what power your words have!

nice! LUV IT! and it is not blue it is green most of the time

He pretty good story really short 2 and incomplete. But its ur story so what u want goes. But still a good read thx later.

Pweez oh pweez oh pweez continue. I can not bear not to read the next chaptrer of this lovly story.

(looks at what I wrote.)

Wow. I'm starting to sound alot Ayame-san.

I love it but I feel sad for Kyo he loves Tohru but there is only one Tohru and two men Kyo and Yuki. I really think that maybe something bad should happened to Yuki or just contiue with your story how it is until this story I have been alaways a Yuki and Tohru together fan and a Kyo and Arisa/Uo fan that or Kagura.
OH and one more thing (Hands you a packet of cough drops) Laughs!

aww plez this is so adorable continued plez

good job so far :D.. i cant wait to see what happens next..

T.T -crys- so sad

Ayase:I...love...this...story *faves and alerts*

that was so sad i creid! plaese write more!