Not bad! When you're putting the End Tag bits in, put a horizontal line between them, though. That'll make it easier to read. But I really liked it. Very typical of Wonder Woman and Diana.

I liked how you showed how Diana and Steve were feeling after the argument. I enjoyed the story.

I am so thrilled to see a new Wonder Woman story and this one is well written and shows the relationship between Diane and Steve. It was nicely done and I hope you will post more Diana/Steve stories.

So sweet! And and excellent addition to one of my fave episodes.

Aw...

This is a great story. You should have a love story between Diana and Steve. They make a good couple. Which is really awsome.