That was fantastic.

it's cool to see new sides to cats u hardly ever hear about.

do u know newhere else i can find romance stories with pounce or etcetera or both.

Nice work on this!

OMG! Come ON! Please write more? Plese? *begs on hands and knees*

Oh it was SUCH a good story!

Poor Pouncie! But this story still carries a good moral-

(should I say?)

That any fear can be overcome with both time, and patience, but also maturity.

Maturity can also be, so to say, a 'side effect' as well.

Oh! Great fanfic, very well written. Might i suggest organising it into chapters? it'd be easier to read that way...

That was a very good fic. I haven't read too many other stories about Pouncival. This one was very touching and it gives you something to think about. I liked it.

A very good story. Tere are not many Pouncival fics around here. It was deep and sad, you have portraited Pounce's feelings in a very sensitive way. Good job!