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Misty Sapphire 1/24/06 . chapter 1
-lol- Oh man...

If this is their first job together, then I can't wait to see all the other jobs they'll have.

-lol-
LadyKayoss 7/13/05 . chapter 1
The concept of a Lee-orchestrated bank heist is a funny one; I like how they plan ahead of time for the collateral damage. Of course, it doesn't look like Jett's going to stick to the plan very well, is he? *grins* Oh, yes... Stan Lee is evil... And so are you, for that matter.
Cambria Kilgannon 9/4/04 . chapter 1
MY GOD! This is actually kinda funny... I got every single pun in there, though I am NOT a perv, thank you very much. :-)
blaze 9/1/04 . chapter 1
OK I'm hooked. Now what?
Repto 8/31/04 . chapter 1
O.o Oh great this was a sequel? Oops... I never read Waiting room madness maybe I was supposed to read that first... (Would be more interested if Ock is in it.. . ..) Anyway.. I like it...in it's own pervy way..but Otto's in it so hey! :P
The Space Toaster 8/30/04 . chapter 1
Oh yes, and I forgot to say this:

2, 4, 6, 8, what would we appreciate, update! Update! Yay UPDATE!

Heh heh. We need more Jett and Ocky.
anacsadder 8/28/04 . chapter 1
They're, er, "fist" job? LOL! Thank the powersthat be for typos! Okay, sorry. I'd say that chapter definately could have been PG-13, even with the octopus molestation. I love how everything is all set up to go before they even get there! That is so great! heehee... Hooray for octopus molestation! I'd molest him if I could. *nod nod* Ok, yeah, I'm done now.
NatzandtheRatz 8/27/04 . chapter 1
he! this is FUN!

Luvverly mental images here! Rock on
Space Toaster 8/27/04 . chapter 1
*Giggles* Jett, you crazy, crazy boy you! )

_

*Steals Jett and runs away*
Tentacle-Enthusiast 8/26/04 . chapter 1
Loved it as much at the first one. If you have to wait until you get bored to write a third enstallment, I hope you get bored soon, hehe. When you mentioned Disneyland I got a really weird mental image of Doc Ock on the Dumbo ride. That should be in the next one, LOL.
cherryhobbit 8/26/04 . chapter 1
This is awesome! I do hope you write more. I love the take on the comic world. Please write more! Pleasepleaseplease!
DocOcksGirl31 8/26/04 . chapter 1
yea another story form you too cool keepu pthe grea writign this is good! hope to see more chapters from you in the near future!
Jun 8/26/04 . chapter 1
Oh man... this is cool! XD Poor Doc, putting up with unwanted advances. I like the whole idea of Stan Lee paying for damage and everything is partially staged. Pure Gold! You have good grammer and description for your story, as well as good characterization. I strongly encourage you to continue; you've got a good thing going here.
Shir-ran 8/26/04 . chapter 1
Bwahaha! Good work Stray! I'm so pleased you carried this one on! I love the way you have brought up the marvel routine and what the guide is the have to follow.

This is good!

Well Done.

Loved it.

Would read the next one.

-Shir-ran
Goldbryn Callow Lyte 8/25/04 . chapter 1
HEE_ That was so funny! ::grins madly and pulls out her clipboard:: Dude...would you totally mind if I doodle this guy? I NEED more muse-lings at school and the sparks these two have between them are freakin' hilarious_

Anywho...GREAT JOB! I do so hope you get bored quickly cause this looks like it could be a REAL interesting series.

And I love the whole Set-up bank robbery. It just totally makes the fic _

Lollipops and Huggles
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