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Reviews for: Talk It Out
AshlynJenkins
2007-07-15 . chapter 1
I am reading your stuff (or i ought to say art?). And taking five minute breaks to re-read (lost count of #) all of Rowling's 6 because i honestly cannot (along with capitalize my i's?) wait another--er--6 days? Ugh, seems so much longer when put that way. I am rambling (see: even a slight summer tan and re-modeled room can not change my rambling). So this, is like amazing. i have read alot of stuff and will probably review a lot more because i am on a coffee high and my laptop is cooperating (knock on wood)--BUT for the record this was my first one because my new obsession, besides giving you that yes, after rereading, Ginny is SO evil, is Sirius and Lily. and just the Blacks in general. ::Big exhale:: finished reviewing. WAIT. 08/04. Like 8th grade you wrote?? I was still obsessed with Waddel/and Geo was like the yellowtooth boy from 6th that landed a 2 day relationship with Bunch? and you were in your fanfic world with this talent!? geez. i have no skills!!
Pranks Are So Siriusly Padfoot
2006-08-13 . chapter 1
aww...

kind of sad...

but funny at times

overall grade: A

Pranks Are So Siriusly Padfoot
cylobaby
2005-04-04 . chapter 1
That was really good. Very interesting. I like Sirius in this fic, very suave.
Shading in Grey
2005-02-24 . chapter 1
Really, really nice.

The ending was very touching.
mirai3k
2005-01-14 . chapter 1
i'm an RL/LE fan but this is great too...i thnk you characterized them both really well. lol i love how you wrote Sirius! wanna see more *adds to faves*
Allacaya
2005-01-14 . chapter 1
Loved the dialogues. Refreshing. Sirius definitely has a rather open definition of relationship - did he tell James?
Highly entertaining, keep it up!
Moon Burst
2004-08-29 . chapter 1
I liked this...I'm writing a Sirius/Lily fic myself, and I'd never read another one so I was interested to see how other authors executed the (in my opinion) lovely pairing. I really liked this, very cute. Well done.
Gwendolyn James
2004-08-26 . chapter 1
Wow - really amazing! First fic I've read with pure dialogue and it was great! There was only one part that was a bit confusing - the part in the middle with the kiss - I just got a little confused with who was saying what for a second. ;) But it was really so well done - bravo!
Siriusly Hannah
2004-08-25 . chapter 1
OMG! This was really REALLY GOOD! It was funny, and sweet, and just...just perfect. It wasn't confusing to me, and I've never read an all diolauge fan fic before so it was different. I love Lily/Sirius but there aren't enough of them. You should try a longer Lily/Sirius fic. I bet it'd be really good since your such a talented writer. Well, there's not much else to say since this was so bloody perfect! Great job!

~Nicky Black~
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