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| j 2007-10-31 ch 1, anon. | abusethis is soo sweet! |
| Ltldogduff 2007-09-08 ch 2, | abuseI really like this. It's unique and interesting, and written with the voices of each individual character. Keep going, maybe do one of Paula?? -Ali |
| MichelleBA 2007-07-30 ch 2, | abuseO so bitter...it's sounds exactly like Carrie! Totally in-character! Awesome job! |
| Annie 2007-06-01 ch 2, anon. | abuseOMG I love it ! Carrie's POV was great, I really enjoyed reading it ! I hope you're gonna right some more POVs soon, like Jack, Kim or Bill's one. Bill's POV would be really interesting, knowing that he kind of likes Michelle. Anyway, great job !! |
| laura sedai 2007-01-30 ch 1, | abusePerfect portrayal of George Mason, and, as always, Tony/Michelle is great. I like the idea to look at their relationship from the outside. Keep writing! |
| .jc.loves. 2006-12-06 ch 1, | abusethis chapter was really good...cant wait to read carries point of view... |
| cat 2006-07-23 ch 2, anon. | abusethese two chapters are really good, and funny |
| Lady Beatle 2006-05-29 ch 2, | abusei really liked this story and i think u should continue it even though you stopped updating ovr a year ago. it would be fun to see someone like chloe's or chappelle's pov, too |
| modernxxmyth 2006-04-17 ch 2, | abuseI absolutely adore this fic. Please add more! I'm LMAO at Carrie's opinions. It's great. |
| Sadie 2006-01-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh, I love this! I wish you'd update it with more POVs.Maybe Paula, Jack (one of my favorite POVs) or maybe even, God forbid, Ryan Chappelle. I don't know, Kim, Chase, Chloe would be funny. You're really great at capturing the characters into a fic. PLEASE write more, you're a really great writer, I wish you'd write more fics. |
| fakeID123 2005-12-12 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love this. I wish you wrote more chapters! You captured Mason perfectly. |
| MBAM52993 2005-07-14 ch 1, | abusei love it, you should write more happy stuff. |
| zen 2005-06-27 ch 2, anon. | abusei just discovered your tony/michelle stories on and i just wanted to say I loved them so much! I hope you decide to continue them. |
| Unique-Chick 2005-03-12 ch 1, | abusePlease keep writing this story. It is the best one you have written! Maybe you could do tony or michelles prospective of the other? |
| Megp 2004-09-04 ch 2, anon. | abuseAnother great job on this chapter! Carrie is just so unlikeable and you captured her well. Can't wait for the next part! |