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Reviews for: One Last Day: Miroku's Thoughts
Full Shadow Alchemist
2008-03-02 . chapter 1
ya know, i kinda liked the original better myself as well. i think that was very cute, but pointless. you should have gotten other characters to answer the question as well
CallaRose4ever
2005-12-02 . chapter 1
I really liked them both. The original is more stirring because it is something that is here and now. The other is a fantasy so you are a little more removed...plus I don't know if Miroku really has a family except for that drinking old monk who I think raised him. but then we never hear what happened to his mother do we? Or if he had brothers or sisters...but then wouldn't they have windtunnels too? hmm. interesting thought. Maybe I will have his sister show up in my story and she can become Hatori's new flame. LOL
faery pink sparkle
2005-08-20 . chapter 1
I prefer Miroku's one over kagome's... it's something different. It was short, but it was good ^_^

Pink Sparkle
Kudos4U
2004-09-03 . chapter 1
Miroku better, but I would like to hear what he had to say... It would be really interesting if you did that. Keep it up though, because so far I have read all of your stories.
inuachie
2004-08-26 . chapter 1
I like the one w/ Miroku better. It's longer and has more detail to it.
InuYasha'sGurrl
2004-08-26 . chapter 1
umm...thats a hard choice...is Kagome sick?? I KNOW! you could write both! Two seperate fics! LoL sorry but both ideas are just awesome and its hard to pick...you could combine them...um...like Kagome is sick and Miroku is afraid of being sucke dinto the Kazaana. The fic could be based on everyone's fears! Sango could be afraid of...not getting Kohaku back and Shippo could be afraid ofnot avenging his father. InuYasha...well...thats one tough cookie...LOL
Plz update soon!
Ciao!
~*Minty*~
Ocean Lore
2004-08-25 . chapter 1
Umm, I like both of them, but I kinda like Miroku's better, because there are tons of "Indepth of Kagome's Turbulent Thoughts About Her Dreadful Yet Rewarding Life" fics. It'd be interesting to know what Miroku's thinking for a change. You know, underneath all that hentai is a really sensitive guy... Hey that rhymes! But I'm not gonna bore you. ^^;
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