Wow, very powerful. Good job!

Wow I never expect to find such excellent story.

Very good job.

Hm...well, it was rather dark and twisted, yes, but I think I liked it...yes, I think I liked it quite a bit.

And I didn't think I would...it must be your excellent writing skills! )

Wonderful job.

Oh...kay. Rather odd, but I think its intresting. Dark, and yet totally diffrent then i was expecting... But I must say, I rather like it. Fancy that XD.

-Cailean

I really really like this piece . . . absolutely dark and twisted. Makes you hurt in all the right places. I don't really like the last line though, maybe it's the language of "rather misses" it sounds strange, though I like the very very understated sentiment. I just never thought of John saying "rather" like that. Oh well. Lovely anyway.

Gaia

aw..that's so sad.

And emo. I like it.