I'm glad i read this its really good, and i throughly enjoyed it. I hope you continue because i really want to see what happens to Hotaru...*sniff* its so sad...why do they always pick on her! GR! Anyway, i'll try and get an update soon.

I would suggest that, in publishing an RPG as a fic, you standardise each player's part.

This is really nice so far and quiet differn't to. I hope there will be more written.

this is a very different and interestingly written fanfic. Your style is very funny and discriptive, and i really enjoyed looking at it. Thankyou for putting it up so i could read and enjoy it.

Peace out

Emma