this is a great story! it feels like it's a real movie! i really hope some day you will continue. you have a great writing style that kept me laughing, and full of suspense at the same time!oh, and i love how you are able to portray each characters personalities perfectly!PLEASE consider continuing this story and know that you still have interested readers who are dying to know what happens next!

The drama!

I'll have you know, this is extremely addicting. You've had me laughing hysterically, spazzing with panic, and sitting wide-eyed at the edge of my seat in a 'No...way...!' sorta fashion.

What you've written is so amazingly witty, both in conversation and plot twists, that it blows my mind.

I eagerly await your next chapter.

-Kai

WTF? NO! Morgana can't die! Darkwing won't let it happen! There's gotta be some sorta loophole!

For the love of Morgana and the possibilty that she might not die, UPDATE THE FRIGGING STORY!

That was quite clever how you got everyone to say Gosalyn's name...extremely creative!

o0 Ah! Darkwing! RUN FOR YOUR LIFE!

Gee, Toybox, I wonder...

Why would TAURUS BULBA want an EXTREMELY POWERFUL MAGICAL OBJECT! You idiot...

I'm sorry but, I can't remember, why does Megavolt always forget things?

I's me again, what a sequil, I just finnished chapter 9, what a place to leave it hanging, WoW! Gos talking with the mysterious Mr. WaddleMyer, the voice coming out of NegaGos and now the erie curse, translated from the old parchments! This is a great story, fabulassly scary, I can't wait for the next chapter. This story has everything, what an episode, both your storys would have made. I am getting chills just thinking what might be next. Please continue soon! Great job so far.

I'd love to see a synopsis of later chapters if you wouldn't mind send it to me, the detail and characterization of these stories are wonderful

Wonderful story, very creepy and awesome. Please update. I'm glad to see Negaduck's "lighter" side, because just as DW has his bad points, ND has good ones, but they're often ignored by authors. But not by you, so kudos!

what happens! argh! this was turning out to be soo good too...! details...details...i must know what eventually happens..plz..

Don't stop there you have me in supsense

i really really like where this fic has gone... when I found out that you weren't continuing I was very very sad...

in this chapter i really liked the relationship growing between Negaduck and negagosalyn... it was in character and yet I thought it was sweet... i loled when I read that negaduck had forgotten how to swing...

negaduck's motivations for being sweet to the little girl are pretty solid, which makes it all the more real and in character...

as for gosalyn... well, i definitely don't trust mr. waddlmeyer...or should i say, Taurus bulba?

it really wrenches my heart seeing gosalyn giving darkwing the cold shoulder... but i have to say that it was partly darkwing's doing also...

the plot takes yet another twist... I'm saddened that it will never be completed...

your style of writing is very true to the series... very flowing and very smooth with its transition from side splitting hilarity to spine chilling creepiness and drama...

I like the little details, such as the backwards names and spells... throwing in sayings and flashbacks and trivia from the vast episodes, and hence making this story's universe stronger and practically like the real thing...

if you can, may i see your synopsis and any drafts of the later chapters? i've gotten stuck on this fic for two straight days, and i can't just let it go! gah!

goes to show what a great writer you are... please consider on finishing...please?

Wow. This really looks amazing. You have so much imagination ! I've read a bunch of fanfics on and there are a couple that I like, but I definitely think that yours are the best. It seems that you're the only author that manages to combine the sophistication of "mature" fanfics with a deep respect for the Darkwing Duck tradition. I mean, overall, your story is pretty funny. Sometimes hilarious. I've laughed out loud especially when Negaduck is pretending to be a true father to his daughter, while inside he actually loathes the act. All the characters manage to retain their eccentricity that they had from the cartoon. At the same time, you weave in a very complex tale that includes a lot of mystery, many characters with different motives, and just a very intricate plot. And there is also, behind the humor, a lot of emotion in your stories - and I do mean a lot. There's action & adventure, suspense, horror, mysticism, and a lot of character development - all very different ingredients that play so well in the story.

What happened to this story? Is it still being written? It was updated over a year ago.

I really enjoyed this fic. I'd love to know how it ends! PhantomPhan, are you planning to finish this story? Great cliffhanger in chapter 9. I'm sure I'm not the only one waiting to see what happens.