Wow. It almost made me cry.I really pity all the characters in here...

This was plain out amazing!

Awesome... just awesome.

*sigh* Good writing though

WoW...deep

*rolling eyes*

Ur a v. good writer

Jeez, what a screwed up lyf

*sniff*

Aw...poor thing...:'(

Some points I must make about the story:

1. Pure genius. Those flashbacks of Tootie's kindergarten year, mainly the first and final days of school, certainly had me riveted.

2. You say Timmy's to blame for Vicky becoming a monster? I seriously doubt it. Maybe it was someone who only LOOKED like him.

3. I took another look at the fourth chapter of Shrouded Silhouettes and couldn't find a clear enough connection between it and this story. Maybe I just need to read Reflections...

4. Your disclaimers are unnecessary. We already get the idea.

In conclusion, I submit the following song:

cannot take this anymore

I'm saying everything I've said before

All these words they make no sense

I find bliss in ignorance

Less I hear the less you'll say

You'll find that out anyway

Just like before...

Everything you say to me

Takes me one step closer to the edge

And I'm about to break

I need a little room to breathe

Cause I'm one step closer to the edge

I'm about to break

I find the answers aren't so clear

Wish I could find a way to disappear

All these thoughts they make no sense

I find bliss in ignorance

Nothing seems to go away

Over and over again

Just like before

Everything you say to me

Takes me one step closer to the edge

And I'm about to break

I need a little room to breathe

Cause I'm one step closer to the edge

I'm about to break

Everything you say to me

Takes me one step closer to the edge

And I'm about to break

I need a little room to breathe

Cause I'm one step closer to the edge

And I'm about to break

Shut up when I'm talking to you

Shut up, Shut up, Shut up

Shut up when I'm talking to you

Shut up, Shut up, Shut up

Shut up, I’m about to break!

Everything you say to me

Takes me one step closer to the edge

And I'm about to break

I need a little room to breathe

Cause I'm one step closer to the edge

I'm about to break

Everything you say to me

Takes me one step closer to the edge

And I'm about to break

I need a little room to breathe

Cause I'm one step closer to the edge

And I'm about to break

THIS STORY IS SO DARK THAT I LOVE IT!

UPDATE IT SOON! I LOVE THE WAY YOU MADE TOOTIE! SHE'S SO DARK AND CONFUSED!

I am a complete TimmyxTootie fanatic! It was heartbreaking that Timmy ended up with Trixie. Tootie was his obsessive fan and I couldn't blame her for getting Vicky on her side. Her past was absolutely dreadful and that wish Timmy made was totally horrid and vile! I really hope that Timmy does get fed up with Trixie in the future - just like Wanda said he will.

I think this story AND Reflections in a Shallow Pool are brilliantly awesome stories. I also liked Shrouded Silhouettes, but it got very confusing, what with the alternate universes and having to read on to find out what you were talking about. Also, CAN YOU GET THE STORY ANY DEEPER?

Aw! w